OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HECH?!?!? You can't stop it there. What were you thinking?! This is so wrong man, I'm telling you. It HAS to be illegal for this story to stop right here. I nearly had a heart attack, I'm telling you. I really want to scream right about now.

You have to finish this! It is completely and utterly heartwrenching. It's so sweet seeing how much they care for eachother even amidst all the pain and suffereing they're both going through. Please..I know it's been years but if you do come back and read these reviews..please put them all into consideration and finish them? *puppy dog eyes*

YOU.HAVE.TO.FINISH.THIS.FIC! i dont care that its been like...2ish years, but this is one of the best stories i've ever read and you NED to finish it! please update!

This is so inhumane that I find it nearly impossible to believe! I've never heard of this happening in history before! I think you should get a prize for writing this, for bringing the stories of pain to others attention. That this ever happened is one of the most horrible things I've ever heard. Thank you for writing something so challenging and heart breaking.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

This is so sweet and realistic at the same time. I love it. I highly encourage you to write some more. I've never read a fanfiction about war, so this is new and interesting. I wish there were more nonmagic stories.

Hmm... your story is good, and if you continue writing it i wil porbably continue reading but there are a few things that i just don't understand. I realise that the war was a horrible thing, for those on either side, but you keep mentioning that the japanese and germans di these things, and yet Harry and Draco live/fight for Britain.

Another thing... by 1944 Britain was truly feeling the effects of the war. It had finally been brought to their own doors and younger people were being recruited, it didn't matter if a family member was already in the war, they needed everyone they could get and those who didn't volunteer were generally seen as cowards or they had jobs that were far too important such as doctors/firemen and so on. Dudlet would have been encouraged to join the war by all the propaganda and would have porbably willingly gone because he would have thought he would be seen as a hero... Vernon would have been looked down on unless he joined the Home Front.

One last thing and then i pormise i will shut up and leave you alone, the second world war was generally fought in the air. WWI was fought in the trenches, the second world war took to the air. It would ahve been more likely that harry would have been trained to be a pilot.

Like i said, i am surious to see where you are going with this, and i will probably continue to read it if you continue to write it, but that is your decision. I hope my review didn't insult you in any way and please don't think this is a flame, because it really isn't! Think of it as constructive criticism or in the very least an extra review on your counter-y thing!

Please don't be disheartened by anything i have said, i didn't mean it to be mean if it came across that way...

Atropos
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great story, very very interesting

DEAR BLACK ELF ,
I'M SORRY BUT I CAN'T READ THIS YOU SEEM LIKE A WOUNDERFUL WRITER BUT THE KNOWLEDGE THAT THIS HAPPENED IS DISTERBING AND TO PUT MY TO FAVORITE CHARICTERS IN THAT SITUATION WELL... PLEASE UNDERSTAND THAT THIS IS A FLAME. AGIAN YOU SEEM A WONDERFUL WRITER. IF YOU COULD CREATE A DMHP STORY WITHOUT THIS VILE (NO OFFENCE)CONTENT. IT WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATED. MAYBE SOME FLUFF...
SINCERLY ALLIEB13

... so it's over? meh... didn't want it to end... great story! I really loved it!!

Its nice to read a good h/d fic from a different perspective. Its a good break from monotony. I think this is the first fic of this kind that will be placed in our c2 community...write more!

Ee It's so good.
You did a really good job on portraying how awful it was, you really did do you research.

Oi! That was so great! You absolutely MUST write more! Even if it is only on LJ. I'm on LJ more anyways.

i no troubled elf was deleted from this website but couldnt u continue it from harrypotterfanfiction? the last troubled elf i read was number 10 + im really hooked :(
plz consider it
sam

i luv enflamed but didnt u do a story called troubled love? what happened 2 that? i saw it in + u havent upd8ed that in lik a year. plz reply
urz kaz