heloo!! that was yrev gnitseretni and im hoping to see more of it... there was a big transition from first to 3rd person and was surprising at 1st but it's really unique so bravo to you...

i likke. write more pleez? im dying to know wut happens next.

I loved it! But you might want to fix a few grammer mistakes. Please update soon!

hey!! what's up?? it's a good story. when did you wirte this? i don't remember reading it before. but the only thing is you had the whole story in the thrid person and then in the end you changed it to first person. ALSO: my pen name's not poeticlilshygurl anymore! it's the littlest weasley, like my email! hurry up and update soon!!

i like it. please update soon!