hey! BMF stands for my penname. sorry for the confusion, though your translation wasn't bad...=^_^= Interesting topic to write on! different, though i'm betting that, nearly three years later, you know bold and italics...-.-'. loved it!

BMF

I feel bad for Kuwabara he loves Yukina! I liked that nice twist at the end.

I knew Yukina would accept him ,she's nice like that. Can u double space this story b/c it's kinda hard 2 read all bunched up and it's annoying if ur reading and u lose ur place.

it was very sad! how can u make Yukina die. Will Hiei kill himself b\c he is mourning Yukina? or Will he tell Yukina the truth? tell me! Tell me now! ANd how did she die, you might want to include that! a.k.a. This is the all mighty Rachel Cooper!

well one thing. Hiei tells Yukina! he would never ever ever ever do that! not in a billion million years! Not if he was held at gunpoint! But I suppose it was good for this story. I like sweet parts like this. VERY GOOD! Update soon!
~the blondies
Ps oh please don't take this the wrong way! We really liked it!

That was definately good. I can't believe that you are so amazed at getting reviews on a story this good...

Please update!

Aww ww ww.. .. .. ..Kawaii!

OMG, this is good! It's about time Hiei told her! And him slashing his wrists is so sweet! Anyways, I believe it's spelled 'niisan' not 'nissan'. Or you can use 'niichan' depending on which suffix you use. Keep it up! ^_^v
~Melissa-chan~

Great.

*bawls* SO SAD!! I LOVE IT!!

O.O *shivers* Update, and save me from the evil cliffie!

*sobing* wonderful! splendiferous! is that a word? please write more!

Update please *sob*. It's so *sob* damn *sob* good! *Runs off weeping* UPDATE! *Dries tears* Alright I'm better now ^_^