 Silver-WindScar 2006-01-29 . chapter 1Phooey. |
 Dragoon-Hard Metal System 2 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Nice! I love the J and D games. I own all 3
games, plus this story is great so far! |
 Von 2004-05-01 . chapter 1That ended more abruptly than I expected.
Poor Dax, poor Jak.
Good fic. |
 lioness of darkness 2003-12-30 . chapter 1 GOOD good good but i NEED 2 now what happens next |
 Lady Tsuru 2003-11-28 . chapter 1It was so sad... I liked it, however. It was very well-written, too. |
 Shark 2003-11-11 . chapter 1 DON'T TELL ME THAT'S THE END! OH JAKKIE BOY! *cries a tank*
Jak: (Yeppie, I'm free from the Shark once more! Thanks man! @_^)
*(sniff) Keep on the feeding...* |
 Necralis 2003-11-09 . chapter 1 Oh. (sniff) that was good. sad, but good. sounds a llittle like the premise of my fic, actually, but still, really really good. write more! |
 nobinoir 2003-11-09 . chapter 1 Oh very good sad but good! |
 Amandaxter 2003-11-09 . chapter 1Can you huh... continue?
Good Chapter and Keep Going 0_^ |