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Reviews for: On the Mountain
Silver-WindScar
2006-01-29 . chapter 1
Phooey.
Dragoon-Hard Metal System 2
2005-05-07 . chapter 1
Nice! I love the J and D games. I own all 3
games, plus this story is great so far!
Von
2004-05-01 . chapter 1
That ended more abruptly than I expected.
Poor Dax, poor Jak.
Good fic.
lioness of darkness
2003-12-30 . chapter 1
GOOD good good but i NEED 2 now what happens next
Lady Tsuru
2003-11-28 . chapter 1
It was so sad... I liked it, however. It was very well-written, too.
Shark
2003-11-11 . chapter 1
DON'T TELL ME THAT'S THE END! OH JAKKIE BOY! *cries a tank*

Jak: (Yeppie, I'm free from the Shark once more! Thanks man! @_^)

*(sniff) Keep on the feeding...*
Necralis
2003-11-09 . chapter 1
Oh. (sniff) that was good. sad, but good. sounds a llittle like the premise of my fic, actually, but still, really really good. write more!
nobinoir
2003-11-09 . chapter 1
Oh very good sad but good!
Amandaxter
2003-11-09 . chapter 1
Can you huh... continue?

Good Chapter and Keep Going 0_^
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