Wonderful. I wish you had continued!
Perhaps you will, someday :)

This is so good, hope to see more of this.

Wow! I just read this story now, and I love it! Will you be continueing soon? It was so unique. I'm completely enthralled! I just love the Tok'ra! Please continue!

I'm enjoying your tok'ra stories. Jacob is one of my favorite characters. Please continue the series.

This is an interesting take on the Tok'ra relationship, and I definitely want to read more.

I found it a bit hard to follow at first - how did a Tau'ri end up in Niirti's labs? Is there a prior story? But definitley repaid the read.