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Marc d'Auras
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
Well, yet I only read two parts of your series, but I intend to read the others as well.

Until now I can only say the following.
You. are. sick. xD
That's one of the best stories I've ever read, so don't take the "You. are. sick." part negative.
I can only guess what is going on in your mind, but if you can write stories like that it must be good :D

But I do also have some criticism. I think your "chapters" are too short to call them chapters.
Your characters are just rushing from one place to the other, you are skipping almost every possible description of feelings and something like that.
(Okay, I do not know the other parts yet, so keep in mind I'm only judging "The Switch" and "Deity's Escape")
Try do add more descriptions, okay?
*keeps reading your Switch series*
I'll try to add a review every time I finish one part, okay? Hang on for my next ;)
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-26 . chapter 21
Yipee! Ruto's cool! But what about Nabooru...? *Checks watch Crud! I have to figure out what happened in math while I was reading!
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-26 . chapter 20
YEAH! Battle scene! Good writing!
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Yeah! Ruto's coming soon! YEAH!
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-26 . chapter 18
NO! NO DEPRESSED AUTHORS! EVIL! *Does random clown tricks* Yes, I'm still in a rush, I need to finish all of your stories and move on to Blu's one-shot and then read a bunch of GS author's stories, but I really like this!
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-26 . chapter 13
Hey, I just thought of something. If you don't like either the 'name combo' or '-shipper' terms, how about L/M? Does that work for you?
Again, a great chapter! Me like!
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-25 . chapter 6
I have to agree... Just one more fic! With really long chapters, wierd pairings, and lots of time stolen... Darn it, I gotta run. I wanna read more!
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-25 . chapter 4
Arrgh! It's the game all over again!
Link: With a twist, of course.
Of course. That's what makes it so cool! But MM was really hard... Maybe I should try to beat it now that I've beaten OoT...
Armond - aka MC
2004-05-25 . chapter 3
Uh oh... BAD fierce Deity! Bad! No killie characters!
koji san
2004-03-15 . chapter 6
oh, my last review, that wasnt a meh of dislike, just a meh ^_^ creepy, dawn of the world as well as the end, the future as well and the past...-_-'
koji san
2004-03-15 . chapter 5
meh. thats all i've to say. meh.
koji san
2004-03-15 . chapter 1
O.O goddesses stirring up trouble, fun!
sorry i havnt reviewed in a long time, my computer is a $#@!(*&% and wouldnt let me on fanfic.net poo X_X
bye ^_~
koji san
2004-02-26 . chapter 2
RAW ENTERTAINMENT!
(that was a truely useless review, i apologize)
El Hustino
2004-02-19 . chapter 21
I have finished reading another story!
Malon is pregnant...but I already knew they their daughter is in the sequels, so I'm not really that surprised...there's not really any way to have a daughter that doesn't involve prenancy.
The Fierce Deity fight was pretty good. Well, I'm going to read 'father of time' sometime later...right now I'm a bit dazed since I read half the story straight through, had to stop, then I just read the last 12 chapters straight through.
In fact, I'm kinda dizzy...
Dez384
2004-02-13 . chapter 20
Looking back at the good old days (that weren't too long ago) when no one reviewed almost. Do you still have lost chapter 20? If so could you please put it up again? Just put with your regular author's notes. It's not illegal. I love loopholes in the law.
Ninmast
2003-11-24 . chapter 23
Hey, Ninmast here. (As if you couldn't tell that from the review title) Anyway, I just finished The Deity's Escape. I kinda fell behind on The Switch, and finally got my act together and found out about your sequel. I think I put away about fifteen chapters today. Man, my neck's stiff. But it was worth it. It was very good, and I'm going to start on Father of Time immediately, stiff neck or no.
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