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| Babs567 2004-05-30 ch 9,  | abuseGood chapter! |
| byonca 2004-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseahh get a life...yankees suck...dont bother even finishing this story...it sux and so do u GO RED SOX! |
| Chelsie Randolph 2004-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that it was pretty good. It didn't seem to realistic. It was pretty good though. It really didn't tell that much to me. You should add on to it. |
| Slo Motion 2004-02-04 ch 6, | abuseOMG! You must update soon! This is so GOOD! Please continue soon. |
| meghan 2003-11-20 ch 5, anon. | abusegreat story!! try 2 make the chapters a little bit longer though!! & try 2 add some more with ruthie & simon. |
| hockeygirl7 2003-11-17 ch 5, | abuseGreat story will you please please continue. * |
| LoneEagle13 2003-11-16 ch 4, | abuseCool story,pkeep goin.Oh,I reviewed and all because I'm your cousin. But I didn't read it. LOL!! |
| hockeygirl7 2003-11-14 ch 4, | abuseGood story. Please continue. |
| CJW 2003-11-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat story! Is there more to it I would love to read it? Its kindof hard to understand but it was a good story! |
| Pix E. Dust 2003-11-11 ch 3, | abuseThis is good so far! Keep writing! |
| cfsc 2003-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story please continue! |
| Ghost of Eric 2003-11-09 ch 1, | abuseYour story looks good but it's hard to read it when it's like that. Have the speaking parts double spaced, like this: "Annie, what's wrong?" Eric asked worried. "I broke my nail." Annie responds as she cries then Eric hugs her. "It's going to be okay." |
| Krystal Hicks 2003-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am loving this story so far, keep updateing please! |
| Sam Waterston Fan 2003-11-08 ch 1, | abuseUm... okay. YOu might want to write more than that cause I'm not sure if you are going to write more. You might also want to write more in a chapter, if you have microsoft word, you should type two to three pages then uploaded it. |