i love it!...its the picture perfect moment of heartbreak its beautiful!

Aw, this was so sad. Yet so deep. You brilliantly captured both their emotions! It was wonderful. *sigh* "I love you.." "Thank you."
Geez. This gave me goosebumps. Great job =]

God, this is... unbelievable. Thank you, so much, for writing it. You may have actually just changed the way I think about character relationship construction.

This story is really really good! I love it

very nice story, especially the idea with him as a Dementor sucking her soul out...
I like tragic ends *sighs*

Angie

let's just say that i am no where near disappointed. the range of emotions were really breathtaking. one of the best oneshots ive read...period.

I cannot believe I never reviewed this story. But its so... breathtakingly beautiful, I know I have read it more then three times at least. It seems like such a dead end for her, to have all that emotion and to have him not respond, but this is something that I love in stories like this. Although I don't know exactly who it is... Ginny, or somebody else, the fact that it is Draco is apparent. And I love that in your story he doesn't not turn into a sweet boy as soon as they are together, for that is not who he is, and he cannot be 'tamed' so easily. Again, your writing sends a thrill through me every time I read it, and you have a great great talent that not many people possess.

Wow. I love your work. This story is extremely well written. Fabulous use of metaphors. Just... wow. Keep up the good work!

Anotha gr8 1! U love Ginny, dont you? But, that's fine. I'm addicted 2 your stories.

Well, it is an unhealthy relationship... And sad. I suppose that's the way it goes, sometimes...
Very nicely written :)

hi !love ur story! id like to know though... who is the girl? i man i know u almost always do ginny dracco but just wanna know u know?Great stuff!~lilly

OMG! This is so cool! I also just finished reading 'The Myth Of Innocence'and I want to say that I really really really really loved that story!I told all my friends to read it. Great Job!

Umm...Wow. That was...Wow. How incredibaly ** up. Hold on a moment, I have to wait for my brain to catch back up with the rest of me. lalalalalalalalalala...Alright. Yeah, you could definitely call that an 'unhealthy relationship', at any rate. But you did it beautifully, which is exciting, refreshing, and just a bit scary. I think I love you even more now. :) And the last line was pure brilliance, by the way. Hell, the whole thing was! And very original to boot. (sighs) You're just the best!

Well, that was good. It had quite a lot of description - I'm wondering if you couldn't have made the story slightly better if you left some things to the readers imagination. Sometimes that can be more effective. Either way, I liked it.

The last few lines were brilliant, though. It leaves you thinking. I like it.

Sara

is it finshed?
~Power of the stars