what a cool story!

I thought it might be the fireflies.
wonderful device.
poor Rumil though.
some horrid men!
Thank goodness for men like daris.
Alas, a sad ending for a good man.

thanks for the enjoyable read.
Happy writing.
:)
mk

I really enjoyed this, thank you

Fantastic story. One of the best pieces of writing I've read in a long time.

I'm ready to bawl my eyes out. The last two chapters were WONDERFUL! You portray Haldir quite well as both a caring, loving brother and a protective soul. It is easy to see Rumil opening to him-I doubt he would have answered the question if anyone else had asked.

Justice is sweet but Rumil better not be dead!

This story is playing hell with my emotions! The love Rumil's brothers have for him is such a tangible thing. His fear and resignation of his fate could bring a strong man to tears. I'm anxious to see what happens.

Poor Rumil. When his brothers find out, Callin and his buddies are DEAD. Very DEAD!

Well, you got my attention with the first chapter! I look forward to reading the rest.

a work of art. truly magnificent.
ps.- i reported Careless-Cate about 'ensnared!' i hope you dont mind. -- AllThatJaZZ1

First off, I want to start by saying this story is incredible. I don't think I have ever read a story the evoked so many different emotions in me. You have written the elves the way I perceive them to be – strong and aloof to the outside world but loving and tender with one another within their own. You allowed things to progress naturally. It never felt forced or contrived. Secondly, you have created the most intriguing and original characters that I have read in a long time. They don't overwhelm the story or take over. Their introduction was subtle and clever, and they are adorable. I noticed in your last chapter that you mentioned a sequel. Have you thought of doing an original story with the delightful characters that you have created? I'm sure there is a wonderful story there. Please keep writing and sharing with us.

This is a wonderful story! Great work! Thanks for writing! ^-^

I'm ashamed to say that I'm one of those who were fooled. Badly. Apologies. I didn't know that your story was being copied and I have sent that person a very nice review without knowing the truth until some people wrote to me setting things right. Again, apologies. And thank you for the people who wrote to me.
It's a great story. You've cleverly written the emotional conflict very well. As I said in my review of Ensnared, I love the way Rumil bounced back from the memory of the horrible experience. Congratulations.
And sorry again. I don't think I can say it enough.

I was set straight about what happened with the "other" story. I am embarrassed to say I fell for it. Your story is about as close to perfect as a story can get and I thoroughtly enjoyed it.

This is such a wonderfully story! Its such a horrible thing that someone took your work and used it as their own! Yours is the first the original and nothing beats that. Hope to read more of your work!

he MURDERED them?! god will there be hell to pay... i love how he convinces himself it was the elfs' fault in that weird, uniquly psycotic way of his.-- AllThatJaZZ1