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| Yvonnia 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusePoor Remy. |
| Beaubier 2003-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot. I like your style, and I like the poetry of it. The whole Antarctica thing... don't get me started. I took a hiatus from comics for a few years, not so long ago... you can guess what one of the reasons was. I don't understand what Remy's doing with her. I personally, will never forgive her. But I like what you've done here because it makes his love for her almost understandable. I think it rings very true, because love is, in short, utterly stupid. It makes our brains shut off, and we don't know why we do what we do. If I could accept any explanation for Remy's continued association with her, yours would be it. Ok blah blah blah. anyhow, nice work~ |
| Ludi 2003-11-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting thoughts, although some of them don't seem quite 'Remy-fied' enough. I guess I just have this feeling that he'd be effing and blinding once every five seconds, especially after the Antarctica thing. But that's just me I guess ;) One thing I will say though is that I liked to see the conflict of his thoughts, especially the fact that angry ones seem the most dominant, even though he tries to repress them. Honestly, I thought everyone treated him with an incredible amount of hypocrisy. And I also feel that Rogue treated him like dirt during that entire period, up to the end of the Revolution era. And she said she loved him unconditionally. He should've been a lot more anrgy than he was. Anyway, I'm ranting ;) Nice stuff :) |
| VA-river-gal 2003-11-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, hauntingly beautiful, and sad. |
| MicknStar 2003-11-09 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely good! Very very very good in fact. Superb, even. Your take on Remy is so very plausible, even if - to be nitpickers - you make him a bit of a soggy cracker. The poetry is so lovely though that we don't care. Thanks. |