Your basic idea is a good one, but your execution is very poor.

i love it, it is an inspiration thank you it was fantastic.

m-wah

Dude, I know you're in the army and all, but it's 'corpse', not 'corps'.

And how big would your pockets have to be to fit those Colt magnums...?

good fic...kind of gross at the end...but pretty good...how sad...but at least they got to be with each other...one question...who was the one that ate them?

whoa. that was awesome. i love how in the end you did the epiloge. great touch great fic

What a really cool story. Hmmm...? The G-Mutant was named Jack? Who the hell was Jack? Some idiot who had gotten ahold of the G-Virus? Anyways. why did one of the reviewers mention Nemesis? He wasn't anywhere in the story?