Ah, more foresadowing in his dreams, I like. You're really good at telling Jack's story, I think he'd say the same.

That was a great chapter, flashbacks are my favorite when it comes to stories like these. Althought I'm very curious who this Hard-fisted Hunter. Who is he exactly, and what does Legend have to say about him?

WOW! That was awsome how you tied all that together. I especially liked the part where he loses his eyes. And I actually like your version of how long they were out to sea than what Mr. Gibs said, its a bit more realistic.

Hmm, that was a very interesting way of portraying how Sparrow got the bearings. However, my friends and I thought it was the compass, like what Mr. Gibs told Will, "Aye, the compass doesn't point north. But we're not trying to find north are we?"

Now that was cool! Very creative, I must say, The hand of bones was a clever way of predicting, "What is to come." Even the turtles are a good way to begin The Legend of Captain Jack Sparrow.

WOW! That was cool how you made the reader oblivious through the whole chapter about who Jack's friend is. Lots of skill right there, but let's see if your other chapters are just as good.

Great use of imagery cant almost taste the salt in the air. Really like what you have and am enjoying the story.
Guess youll be continuing with this soon?

Gah!! Cliffhanger!! -shakes- You need to write moree! ;_; Poor Jack...Hector's so mean to him! -smacks his wrist lightly- Please, please, please write more! We have to see what happens to him!

VERY good, i like your style of writing. i really thought you followed the facts that were told in the movie, and this is just a great, great telling of teh before. i can't wait to read more!

this is really good, i'm really into it already! i'm glad you've written this seriously, because i've read some other stuff elsewhere that's just fake and funny crap, but i'm definately liking this!

Love your story. Keep up please. Keep me posted & I'll do the same 4 u.

-sighs deeply- Ahh, it feels so good to read a good chapter again! I love the flashback, it's so informative and fills in the blanks that were left before. You've come on strong with five great chapters, I know you'll keep 'em coming! =D Poor Jack...

Absolutely fabulous piece of work. Everyone has a different perspective on how the mutiny came about, but I would have to say that is the best view I've read of it - you've even included some other details like the bullet wounds and where exactly Jack got the bearings from - good touch. Nicely written and follows closely to the facts presented to us in the film (apart from the number of days out on the voyage, but I understand why you changed it and it does make for better reading!) I'm hoping you'll writ emore soon! = D
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excellent! ye finally uPdated! I did too... WEll, good joab and sorry for my spAzmatic mispelling and capitalization, I just ate chinese food. Not that really has anYthing to do with it its just I can't really type.

Wow...you've just gotten four consecutive reviews from the same person...oh well. Reviews are good! :) Well, I definitely like where you're going with this. The Bootstrap Bill thing was excellent. Just one suggestion-watch how you portray accents etc.-a little is fine, but don't get too carried away. It takes away from the dialogue content.