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buenos
2005-10-17
ch 1, anon.
abusevery nice. i like the whole girl drowns in well and kills people in seven days threw a video tape if they see the tape
Samara Morgan-ring
2004-04-19
ch 1,
abusedamn you good
Candace
2003-12-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour great at ryhming everything! I love how you closed the ending with "seven days left". Great job!
tattered sparrow
2003-11-29
ch 1,
abusethis is very good, but you should break it up. 4-line stanzas would work, i think. bravo!
DarkKrystal
2003-11-15
ch 1,
abuseGuess who posted her first Ring fic? Yay! ^_^
MarcFan
2003-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseCool. You're name is Samara? Lucky! I have a cursed name. Anyone who has my name is cursed and always has bad luck.

Your poem is very good. Sometimes it got a little off the beat, but otherwise RULED.

Isn't Samara so pretty? But I don't get it. She started with brown eyes and ended in blue? Most be when the body decomps the eyes get lighter - in water, anyway. Although I have no idea why. Or maybe it was just for effect, who knows. But decomp in water might explain why Samara looks as if she has aged fifty years!

Ew.

Poor Samara!

Okay, so... Later Days!
~MarcFan~
shady-humour
2003-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseGO SAMARA, GO SAMARA!
ITS NOT URE BIRTHDAY! ITS NOT URE BIRTHDAY!
(u told me off last time when i said it was ure bday :P)

let the insanity continue.

actually, i dont know why i said that,
i mean with the two of US writing, its never going to stop! LOL :P
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