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| Reviews for The Bachelor |
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   BeWhoYouAre99 8/15/12 . chapter 1love it. |
| iAngieMae 8/5/12 . chapter 15 i love his whole i love you speech. from castration to hideous begging. it was cute & completely sappy. but this was my favorite line, "I never thought I'd say it to any girl, but I love you. And so I let go, and I'm here now, and I'm actually begging—and this is also a first for me, hideous as it is—for you to forgive me." especially cause he look disguested with himself. good job on this fic. well done! |
| iAngieMae 8/5/12 . chapter 14 "OH MY GOSH! You like him! Ron, Ron, he has to pick her… I'm going to beat that bastard to a bloody pulp if he doesn't pick her…" my favorite line from this entire fic! ron & harry as dramione shippers? merlin's balls in fucking hell! it's that beautiful. "—what do you mean, good luck? Of course she'll get him! And if she doesn't, he won't be around to be available anyway, I'm aching to hurt that ferret…" splendid. i also loved that line where the jarvey said a tub of zebra lard & thin stick walking. & plump zebra. had me laughing really hard. :) |
| iAngieMae 8/5/12 . chapter 12 why is it that hannah's name always comes out first? |
| Mila Pink 7/28/12 . chapter 15 History is long joke, was a great story. I loved how they were discovering and loving it. I found a lot of fun. And you write very well. kisses |
| Dancer 7/24/12 . chapter 15 First bachelor fic i've read! I was very good. I liked the suspense of the ending. hahaha Although I wanted to throttle you when I read chp 14. JK :P |
| Guest101 7/20/12 . chapter 15 I love this story! Did you know Blaise was boy? Anyways, I love the twist! I was like this is a Dramione story why was Draco picking Hannah? Love it how they ended up together! |
| goody1328 7/20/12 . chapter 15 SUCH a cute story! Love, love, LOVED it!3 |
| Guest 7/10/12 . chapter 9 Hey! I just wanted to say great story so far! But... Didnt u know Blaise was a girl? Zu kinda gave me some disturbing pictures... :s but great story so far! |
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 4 Very intresting... Poor dray, he has girls surronding him XD |
| clumsydolphin 6/27/12 . chapter 4 I am so loving your story, but did you realize that Blaise Zabini is a guy? |
| clumsydolphin 6/27/12 . chapter 2 HA! HA! That was a fun meeting lol! Very funny! |
| clumsydolphin 6/27/12 . chapter 1 I'm glad you went for a unique storyline that hasn't been done to death. As another fanfic author I try for individuality in my own stories and I went looking for a new plot to read and lucked upon this story, I love it so far! Well done! |
| ACreativePenName 6/8/12 . chapter 15 "Real life, unfortunately, was a genuine disappointment after such fantasies." And this story is one of those fantasies :(( Loved it though, it was a really fun read and I loved how they were trying to get at each other in the beginning :) |
| leeji411 5/29/12 . chapter 4 I just wanted to point out that Blaise Zabini is a boy. I just don't know if you knew this, but good story so far! |
