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Sinistree
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
I believe I've read this story about three times over and I find myself falling into it all over again. The progression of the story is perfect for the overall tone of it, and the dialogue only enhances the characters that are revealed more and more with each chapter. An excellent read, truly. I look forward to more.
RainyDays87
2009-11-06 . chapter 10
I bet that Snape thinks that Lucius is raping/molesting Harry; am I right? It would only make sense, with all the hints you're giving. Although I could be wrong; I've read stranger things. I cannot wait for your next installment; I will eagerly wait for the next chapter.


Your Faithful Reader,
Rainy
Elspeth
2009-10-28 . chapter 10
I'm amazed at this story. You've made so Harry so powerful (normally kind of obnoxious) but he's been so hurt and emotionally limited by his awful childhood that he makes a wonderful character. I'm intrigued but what Snape and Dumbledore and Voldemort are going to think as more of what is lurking under Harry's polite, soft-spoken exterior is revealed. Good luck re-writing yourself out of your blind corner. And thanks for a wonderful read.
Holen-Snape
2009-10-23 . chapter 10
So Severus thinks that Lucius has acted in a sexual maner towards Harry? I love the story and look forward to more. thank you
Robinhoodfan13
2009-10-22 . chapter 10
Oh my gosh! good story! good story! (jumps up and down excitedly!) I love the idea of harry being the next idk leader? of the former death eaters! please UD as soon as possible!
planeteer-rach
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Hey!
This is really interesting. I usually don't like dark Harry fics, OR super Harry fics. This has both, and it's still fascinating :) I really want Harry to do something about Sirius soon :)
Rach
LaDiablo
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Gah. This story... so much potential. I hope you do continue it. I've had it favorited forever and bookmarked it when I got the email that you'd updated. I wonder about so much T__T. Snape in particular.
Aisucold
2009-10-18 . chapter 10
great storiy! i hope you get into updating it regularly
history
2009-10-18 . chapter 10
I like a lot this story !
PeanutTree
2009-10-17 . chapter 10
Wow! This is just -- I can't even describe how much I love this story. Not only does it give an original spin on Slytherin!Harry, but it is also incredibly well-written. Harry's character, and his numbed emotions, are intriguing. I've noticed recently in the story that the angst seems to have gotten a bit stronger, and the deceptions a bit more noticeable. Normally I don't go for Dark Harry, but with this story I think I could make an exception. Seeing how Harry forms his perceptions and ideas of the wizarding world helps me understand his mindset. And the Snape thing is really interesting too! It was a great twist that you threw in there at the end.

I'm all for revising stories, but I have to say I'm in two minds about your re-writing of "In Memory I." On the one hand, it's always great to try and improve. On the other hand, it's a shame that we'll be left on a cliffhanger for a while! In any case, I can't wait to read your next installment! You are a talented writer.
WynterRavenheart
2009-10-14 . chapter 10
I applaud you for the length, but you loose points times-wise (6 years is a bit much isn't it?).

Aside from that, great characterization, even if I don't personally agree with some choice pairings. Now story-wise... I just hope Vernon and Petunia get whats theirs, not necessarily through wizards, but Karma CAN be a ** every now and then.
shenmi meiren
2009-10-14 . chapter 10
i must say i am really really impressed by your story so far
especially by your portrayal of draco, lucius and snape...
harry is quite amazing too - i mean the way his character is constructed...
hope you will publish the re-written version soon
or an update...
:]
Kittyfantaztico
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
I really like this story. It is one of the most unique Harry Potter fanfictions that I have read in a long time. I can't wait to read more! I am curious to see where you take all of the characters.
BriJusLuvrr
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
Hey Hun,
LOVED IT! Update soon
sandfull_a
2009-10-11 . chapter 10
I like your story very much. I think it is highly originale and well done too. I was hoping for the update even when it were months without any. Now that I see there may be hope, I would very much like to know at least approximately - when do you plan to continue the story or rewrite it as you said. This new twist of Lucius playing Severus (an i Like this character) is awesome!! Please update soon!
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