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Sony Boy
2009-11-23 . chapter 10
Snape is going to have the wrong idea...of course Lucius may have encouraged that.

I love your Harry and am so infinitely happy and pleased when I saw that this was updated!
Mondkalb
2009-11-23 . chapter 10
lol what is Severus thinking?? it's just so funny, with the scene in Lucius study where Lucius was kneeling in front of Harry with his hands on the boys legs and now the last scene... I just can say, poor Severus.

oww slashish overtunes... or am I reading too much in the chaste kiss Draco gave Harry? well they are kidds, uhm Harry isnt but then Draco is. will the pairing be HP/DM?

I just know Severus fears its HP/LM, poor lonely Death Eater.

I really really like your story

Mondy
So-kun
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
I absolutely love this story! I hope you finish that re-write soon. =) I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
The Metronome Maven
2009-11-15 . chapter 10
This is an incredibly interesting story. It castes a whole new light on the 'trained by death eaters' Harry and I can't wait to see how he develops and what new allies he makes. (I admit that I can't help hoping that Dean will bring Seamus over as well, because they were such close friends in the books) Anyway, please update soon!
Stars-Eclipsed
2009-11-13 . chapter 10
I really like this. I like it when the Malfoy's turn out to be better than in the books. Good luck with the rewrite, and I'll subscribe to the story in hopes of seeing an update of "New story posted".
Sinistree
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
I believe I've read this story about three times over and I find myself falling into it all over again. The progression of the story is perfect for the overall tone of it, and the dialogue only enhances the characters that are revealed more and more with each chapter. An excellent read, truly. I look forward to more.
RainyDays87
2009-11-06 . chapter 10
I bet that Snape thinks that Lucius is raping/molesting Harry; am I right? It would only make sense, with all the hints you're giving. Although I could be wrong; I've read stranger things. I cannot wait for your next installment; I will eagerly wait for the next chapter.


Your Faithful Reader,
Rainy
Elspeth
2009-10-28 . chapter 10
I'm amazed at this story. You've made so Harry so powerful (normally kind of obnoxious) but he's been so hurt and emotionally limited by his awful childhood that he makes a wonderful character. I'm intrigued but what Snape and Dumbledore and Voldemort are going to think as more of what is lurking under Harry's polite, soft-spoken exterior is revealed. Good luck re-writing yourself out of your blind corner. And thanks for a wonderful read.
Holen-Snape
2009-10-23 . chapter 10
So Severus thinks that Lucius has acted in a sexual maner towards Harry? I love the story and look forward to more. thank you
Robinhoodfan13
2009-10-22 . chapter 10
Oh my gosh! good story! good story! (jumps up and down excitedly!) I love the idea of harry being the next idk leader? of the former death eaters! please UD as soon as possible!
planeteer-rach
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Hey!
This is really interesting. I usually don't like dark Harry fics, OR super Harry fics. This has both, and it's still fascinating :) I really want Harry to do something about Sirius soon :)
Rach
LaDiablo
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Gah. This story... so much potential. I hope you do continue it. I've had it favorited forever and bookmarked it when I got the email that you'd updated. I wonder about so much T__T. Snape in particular.
Aisucold
2009-10-18 . chapter 10
great storiy! i hope you get into updating it regularly
history
2009-10-18 . chapter 10
I like a lot this story !
PeanutTree
2009-10-17 . chapter 10
Wow! This is just -- I can't even describe how much I love this story. Not only does it give an original spin on Slytherin!Harry, but it is also incredibly well-written. Harry's character, and his numbed emotions, are intriguing. I've noticed recently in the story that the angst seems to have gotten a bit stronger, and the deceptions a bit more noticeable. Normally I don't go for Dark Harry, but with this story I think I could make an exception. Seeing how Harry forms his perceptions and ideas of the wizarding world helps me understand his mindset. And the Snape thing is really interesting too! It was a great twist that you threw in there at the end.

I'm all for revising stories, but I have to say I'm in two minds about your re-writing of "In Memory I." On the one hand, it's always great to try and improve. On the other hand, it's a shame that we'll be left on a cliffhanger for a while! In any case, I can't wait to read your next installment! You are a talented writer.
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