This was so sad (sniff) and so ... tender. :) Anyway, I think it was a beautiful story. It made me wonder, though ... what if it'd been Trip who got the brain worms? Doesn't the invitation to see Rosemary's Baby seem more like Trip than Archer anyway? Still, your stuff is fantastic, I always love reading it.

Hmm, I think it fits. I too doubt that T'Pol would consent to be called "baby," but I like the line "For all the things I could not be for you." Also, I think you've done a nice job fleshing out how she dealt with telling him about the Xindi every day. They skipped that in the episode.

that is a really good piece, short but nice because it fills in alternates in the episode.
hope you write more t/tp fics as good as this

it was sad and bleak, but beautiful!
Great job!
A. Windsor

great job!
also, im sorry- i just wanted to put this here, bc i know a LOT of ppl (it seems like it, at least) read ur stories- and this NEEDS TO GET TO THE FANS- UPN was thinking of canceling Enterprise...b/c of low ratings- but it shows twice a week...but sundays (the day besides wednesday that its shown) doesn't count. so if u want Enterprise to stay ON, watch it on WEDNESDAY! PLEASE PASS IT ON! (don't remember website, but Connor Tinneer said it in an interview on one of his sites)...

That was just what I needed to read after watching that episode! Very bittersweet.
Thanks so much for writing it.

i'm going to cry.
i just want to ask have you seen Similitude's preview? i was cracking up! We see T'Pol kiss Trip, then he announcer goes "And what he left behind." Then we see a baby. It was hilarious. For a second i thought it was T'Pol and Trip's! Then i remembered the episode, and it was fine.

i think this fic is awful. "baby"? are you kidding me? why does t'pol have to let herself be called "baby" in order to have a relationship? why can't shipper writers make t'pol a strong character? ugh!

You did manage to remain true to the tone of the episode. Nicely done. Well balanced, sad but not *quite* teary. Definitely a good read. Thanks for posting this. This story is... appropriate.

You did manage to remain true to the tone of the episode. Nicely done. Well balanced, sad but not *quite* teary. Definitely a good read. Thanks for posting this. This story is... appropriate.

i really liked ur story...i hope youll continue it

Beautiful, stub! Absolutely beautiful! Thank you!

*sniff* decidedly not happy and not smutty... wow how did you do that? :-)

But decidedly believable and wonderful.

Oh how painful to go through their own retelling each time. And how T'Pol, in this episode, to almost punish herself with the Everthing Day after her night of receiving.

Nicely done.

Lovely. That fitted really well, thank you.

Simply wonderful! Excellent story for an excellent episode. Thanks, stub!