This was really good. I love the idea. I wish J.K. Rowling had had Harry buy himself a flying motorcycle, maybe to remind himself of Sirius or something. Oh well. Keep writing :)

that was so sad... i love reading stories about harry when hes really young gr8 fanfic!

good thoughts and ideas. harry isnt stupid but he is young enough to believe anythink. it was really sweet!

aw how sad, but good.

Great story. Vernon ought to be ashamed

This was a very nice, quite optimistic fic (in my opinion). Poor Harry - he'd been decieved when he was only five years old by the Dursley's. Pfft... slavery. That sounds like Vernon though.

I love how you kept the characters canon, and I also liked the part with the motorcycle. I'd be rather obsessed with a flying motorcycle if I'd had a dream about one. :D

Anyways, loved it. Thanks for writing such a great and read-worthy fic for us loyal and devoted readers to.. well, read! Kudo's on the grammar, as well.

Take care,

Min

Aw it was so sweet. I like how you showed that even though Harry really really wanted the bike he didn't ask, then finally he did. Keep up the good work!

~Patricia

very good,can use a bit of work

aww poor Harry =[
well written.

Oh! this is so sad! poor Harry! poor, poor Harry!
*gives Harry nice shiney RED bike* here ya go! have fun!

Ta,

Poppy

Aw, that was so cute! You need to write more like these. Great job!

Dear Merlin, that was a good ficcy. I feel bad for Harry. The Dursleys are horrible to Harry, aren't they? That's one of the first things I thought about when I read the HP series--how could anybody live with themselves after treating a kid like that?? This story was very well done. The orphanage thing was perfect. It's disgusting that they would tell a five year old that he would become a slave, but it was also believable and fitting of the Dursleys.

Poor Harry, he tried being good. And his pig-in-a-wig couson totally crushed his dreams. Good fic! You're quite an author!
~Deb-lil

That was an excellent one-shot! Very well-written, and I loved Harry's thought-processes. Just a quick note of advice--I think it would be far more effective if you took out the last line, "In five years, Harry would find out..." The attempted lead-in is good, but the story would hold more weight and empathic ability if you ended on the question. Wonderful, keep writing!

Hey those people are nutbars. Sirius should just took Harry or stay. If you like stories where sirius do these things read [ A diffrent life ] by padfoot obssesed 329/ another is, Flesh and blood ] by Taka ichijouji. these are few like the best. That is if you are in to that thing. All so check out your website real cool. Hope to see more. Sirius fan to end.

Aw, that was really sweet! (In a sad way, of course) Thanks for showing the Dursleys as merely bad guardians and nasty people, not physically abusive psychopaths.