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| catspaw 2008-07-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseLove your story. One of my favourite Lance-centric fics so far (wish there were more of them). I think you've done a great job characterizing Lance, he's very believable and Wanda isn't too far off the mark either. I hope you intend to finish this story some day. |
| Yemi Hikari 2008-02-08 ch 8,  | abuseWow! Your updating this again. I ... not to metion other people are quite happy with that. I really like this fic and I had been sad that it had been awhile since it had been updated, but an update! I like the fact that Lance and Chris are getting along so well. Seems Chris has always wanted a big brother. |
| Bowles 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseAh, I've really enjoyed this story so far. Your characterizations are nearly flawless, and this is one of the more interesting origins for Lance I've heard so far. It's too bad you haven't updated in a while, and right at the end, too! But I'm putting you on my alert list if you ever do update. Best of luck with the writing, if you return to it. |
| freddyburn 2007-07-21 ch 8, | abuseloving the story... update soon... please? :( |
| PEACE!! 2007-01-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseOMFG!! YOU UPDATED I'M SO HAPPY. Even it was one chapter still YOU UPDATED!WOO!! |
| Libster59 2007-01-07 ch 8, | abuseI love you thank you for finaly updating |
| me 2007-01-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseGet. Out. Get out! I *know* you didnt suddenly out-of-the-blue update! I must've gone totally bonkers... You know how much I love this story, right? It's so... Just full of characterisation - even minor characters like Dana, it's just like I would imagine meeting a step-son completely-out-of-the-blue must be like for her. And for Nick, too. And I adore everything Lance-related anyways so this fic'll continually be awesome :) |
| Obsidian76 2007-01-02 ch 8, | abuseSweet! I'm glad you updated this. :) Loved the interaction between Lance and Chris, it was really cute. |
| Musee.Picasso 2006-12-31 ch 8, | abuseWow! This story is totally awesome! I can't wait for more! Lance is my favourite character and it's nice to see him as a main character. |
| mark 2006-12-31 ch 8, anon. | abuseloving it so far. update soon |
| Musee.Picasso 2006-12-31 ch 5, | abuseThis TOTALLY rocks so far! It's great to see a story about Lance for once! And i hope he doesn't break up with Kitty... i'll get around to reading the rest tomorrow =) |
| a b 2006-12-30 ch 8, anon. | abuse...this is really good...update soon... |
| croaky 2006-12-30 ch 8, | abuseNice to see an update! Well written and calm chapter. :) |
| me 2006-11-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseI love this part - 'The next part will be longer to make up for this short one, and it will be written faster than this one was' Faster, eh? How long ago was this written? |
| PEACE!! 2006-11-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseWILL TOU UPDATE ALREADY!! |