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HikariAi
2008-10-17 . chapter 5
This one is good... PLEASE update soon... ^_^
thefullmetalAlchemistcayla
2007-10-03 . chapter 1
It's very good and really creepy. This would make a great horror movie. I love it!
Ima
2007-08-26 . chapter 5
I've read this already... 2 years ago. I really hope u update, I want 2 kknow what happens next.
Jordancatgirl7
2006-12-26 . chapter 5
Update soon, please I need to read more!
Jordancatgirl7
2006-12-26 . chapter 4
It wasn't Jake's and Bill's faults, what could they do against a demon anyway?
Jordancatgirl7
2006-12-26 . chapter 3
Excellent chapter, very good and enjoyed!
Jordancatgirl7
2006-12-26 . chapter 2
Goku's in trouble, major trouble! Bring on the hot Yaoi!
Jordancatgirl7
2006-12-26 . chapter 1
Yes, DBZ Yaoi is so hot!
Ic
2006-08-28 . chapter 1
I just want to say that I've read the story before and I just hope that you will continue to write because I read more about what will happen between Goku and Vegeta.
Valeaze
2006-07-28 . chapter 5
i really LOVE this story! I've readit twice and i still think its awesome. Poor Goku, but at least he'll look cool like Vegeta! Please keep writing!GOOD JOB!
WHERES-MY-MOOSE
2006-07-25 . chapter 5
Please please continue this story it is so fantastic! i wanna know if Goku turns into a youkai! It is so well written and so heartbreakiing to see nobody believing poor Goku! And vegeta's character fts him to a 'T'!!
Sexual Deviant
2006-04-14 . chapter 5
Okay, your story was great until this point...NOW IT IS ** AWESOME! :jumps up and down probably from the Starbucks the reader has been drinking: YOU MUST finish this beautiful story. WOW. Why does this not have more reviews? I know its bad to base a story on reviews (chh trust me I know) but most of the time when the summary doesn't do it I check out the reviews.

I love how you have Vegeta as a completely sadistic bastard...and it suits him. Haha I could not have been more amused when you said the line about thats what he got for calling him a **...although he is. Probably more or so bi though. And also the chubby attendant taking care of Goku died as well right? Probably for messing with Goku...little confused on who Richard Hideux was, thats why I assumed it was the chubby attendant...this fiction is a piece of gold...FINALLY. You don't understand how many ** Vegeta/Goku fics I have gone through today...just horrible. I could've banged my head against the screen...and then salvation when I came upon yours. XD

Really hope you don't discontinue this fic though. LOVE IT.
Sexual Deviant
2006-04-14 . chapter 4
Oh :eyes tear up: the doctor was a fan of Goku's from the martial art days when he used to compete and be happy go lucky...I am so sad now...poor Goku.

Whoever knew that this story would turn out so kick-**...honestly? I had doubts even though the plotline was awesome. I laughed when those idiots Jake and Bill were like...maybe there was a demon? Too bad they don't know how right they were...
Sexual Deviant
2006-04-14 . chapter 3
That was such a long yummy chapter! Made my day. :D
Hmm, so the smex was awesome too bad you couldn't write details...but the stupid FFNET rules...eh oh well. It was fine like this. XD
Sexual Deviant
2006-04-14 . chapter 2
Hmm, I really hope hes real.
That would make the story all the more interesting, that and Goku wouldn't be completely messed up...
Hmm :bites a cookie:
This is making me think too much in the morning but alas, I guess I must do it.
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