Great story, action packed and can't wait for the chapter.

Hey Nisus!
Said I'd get to your story didn't I? Anyway, I did, and found a damn good read as well! Your writings is mostly really good, your descriptions of fights being exceptional. Characterisation was pretty good all round, although I found Kate a little weird, or something, can't put my finger on it.
So here is the highlight, the action, which is what this story seems to revolve around fot the majority of its length. You've devised some very good action scenes here and they were all described well, with just the right pace. Perhaps a little too much gun play however (At least in my opinion) I always try to limit guns to a few characters that I feel they represent their frame of mind, or character.
An example being Wesley in Season 4. We see him using guns a lot, which makes him stand out from the other characters by enhancing his ruthlessness in battle. Guns, to me, symbolise a lack of honor, which is what dark wes seems to pride himself on.
Anyhow, good read, and I'll be reading the next chapter! My story should be updated in a couple of days too! Bye.

HI, great two chapters. I liked the freindship between Angel & Wes. keep up the great work and i hope to see Cordy in the next 3 chapters. when i finish reading them as well i'll send you a review for all three. this story is really god.

Hi. COOL! PLZ CONTINUE!

Hey I rwally love this story! I think that you are doing a great job. I know this is gonna sound REALLY corny but WRITE ON!

Hi. COOL! Ok...Wes-Angel friendship is COOL! Also..liked Gunn in this one!! Update Soon! make it B/A!