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| inuficcrzy 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseaw, cute!! |
| Dragi 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abusenice story really cute too :) good luck with ur stories ^^ love dragi |
| ShadowShifter 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abusei can see Vinnie trying to be tough at second grade and it's an endless source of amusement. |
| KLCtheBookWorm 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuseFew typo errors with punctuation and turning Vinnie into a "she" at one point, but overall a touching first meeting. |
| Silver Elf Child 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAh. Loved it the firts time I read it. Love it still, but now I can leave a review. Ta da! Like? I find it funny how Vinnie is always trying to prove himself that he's tough. If he didn't try so hard, I might believe him. (maybe not). So when's Modo (my main mouse) going to show up? You gotta love the gentlemouse. Anyway, keep writing, I know I'll keep reading. Smile, Live, Laugh, Love and God Bless. Namarie Elfy |
| Morning 2003-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow can you do anything but love this. Vinnie sounds so cute and Throttle is such a great big brother figure. More Hayden, gives us lots more. Morning |