Hehe, hey Ashley! This is such an awesome ficcy ya got herre! Lol, I'm so glad that you're still into ff8! When was the last time we talked on MSN? I really miss you! :( And keep writing girl! This letter is SO sad! I was like, Squall dead? No...No...NO! At least Rinny cakes has Seify now, heh. But nonetheless, this was so great and I do hope that you'll have more english assignments like this! Lol, only cuz that way you can have lotsa time to write more awesome ff8 fanficcys _ Bye now! I'll definitly make sure to holla back at every new story you upload! Mark my words D Well, see ya!
*Squall's angel*

Very nice idea and the sentiments are believable... But also, while the length works for the piece, I think some of the phrasing, such as that in the second paragraph, doesn't quite fit with the mood you're trying to create or Rinoa's character. Just some ideas to consider. Keep at it. _