I concur with previous comments... what is going on? This was such a good intro! We must know ;) So if there's any chance of a conclusion to this story, pretty please with a cherry on top? :)

2004! C'mom dog. No disrespect but what's the hold up. I understand you may have things to do but 4 years! Going on five. Please tell me you didn't abandon such great story. I hate most to find a decent story with a great storyline, better grammatical skills than most and see it not finished. If their are physical problems, let the reader know and we'll wait another 4yrs, but if not... UPDATE!

Why is she being targeted for?

What are they planning?

Please update ASAP.
Great story.

You should update this one as well! I can't wait to read more...

plz update! i reall

OH! Please update ASAP! I have GOT to know what in the world is going on! This is an extraordinary story! I like it a lot! Keep up the good work!
Kyoko

Great chapter; very enjoyable and accurate. This story is awesome!

I like where this is going. This is really good! I can't wait to read more! *hurries to the next chapter*

Ooh...SUSPENSY! I like this chapter; it got right into it! Stupendously done!

The perfect logic of Bruce. I applaud you; this sounds as if the man himself wrote it. Wonderful job.

Great first chapter! I look forward to reading more.

I hope you update this story soon! It's so great--it'd be a shame if you never finished it...;-; Cool cliffhanger =D

Great story, can't get my work done, thinking of what might happen. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing.

Interesting story! I hope you continue it. You have to...please? :)
Update soon, please.

Good chapter. Write more soon.