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| Val Mora 2005-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseWas sent here via permetaform's rec list, and I'm glad I read this - it's very funny! (especially dealer!Hakkai. Because I can so see that.) (and Sanzo with his tape recorder) And with all the anachronisms in the original Saiyuki, this might very well work in the actual universe. Sort of. Anyway, enjoyed it lots, and my favorite line is the exchange of, "You can't kill him. I've tried." / "But the bulletproof vest helps!" |
| narrizan 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseahahaha! i read this one over from EftW, and its still funny. You really paint such a picture of them. |
| wolflover 2005-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL! i love it! i really like the recorder thing though, and the bad guy conversation, and their rivelry, and that last bit!^.^...whit a minut, i just listed the whole thing, oh well it was all good! u sould continue! mabie make it SanzoXGoku? anyway, great fanfic! |
| kireira 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseXD Fun fic. I like Homura and Zenon's conversation best. |
| permetaform 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuse=) loved this, reccing you in my C2 community... |
| Renet 2004-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was so funny! Everyone was so nicely in-character too. Especially Goku. Hee! |
| NekoMegami-chan 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I mean it - this is the ONLY Saiyuki AU I've ever liked. Mostly I just avoid them and when I do click on one I frequently get a few paragraphs and then it's the back button treatment. YOu had me laughing out loud on this one; your style is smooth and funny and the story never lagged. Thanks a bunch for writing. And now...I'm off to read more of your stuff! |
| AOM 2004-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI see dead people. *snickers* This fic had me in stitches. Good job. |
| Jenny-fer 2004-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery funny, very nice! XDXDXD The title makes so much sense now! ^o^ |
| Gun Mage 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseNice! I can see some of that happening. You've got the characters personalities down. Very, very coo. I absoulutely loved it! ^_^ |
| burnein 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuse*bows down* Hilarious and spookily accurate. I like this! ^_^ You should do more; only in different locations, maybe even different times. |
| Kath 2003-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic! The characters were beautifully in character, and the story is just perfect. Shame its not an episode... |
| Elf 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseDelightfuly funny story. The dialouge, the feel for it, everything. Reminded me of an Anita Blake novel actually. Plus, loved all the one liners. Excellent job. |
| Eat A Peach 2003-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThis fanfic made me picture Sanzo in a trenchcoat, looking like Humphrey Bogart. Why? I don't know. But it's a brilliant fic, believable premise, and it's easy to imagine all of them in those roles. Also, it made me snort with laughter, which is always a good thing. |
| Veszelyite 2003-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilarious, definitely one of the best AU fics I've read. I have to agree with Nightfall Rising--it would be nearly impossible to write a review that would do this story justice. Please write more like it! ^_^ |