This story is absolutely beautiful! It shows the turmoil that Sam went thru due to her relationship w/Jack as well as Jack's inability to let her go. It is wonderfully written and it actually brought tears to my eyes when she asked him if he could let her go...you have a gift, please keep writing!

What a beautiful story! Sad, yet happy at the same time. Are you thnking of writing an epilogue, becasue I for one would sure read it! Nice work.

Sorry for the late review! A quick paced story that covers so much territorty: time, emotions, twists and turns. Great job!

This was quite a journey you followed these characters on. The tone, the description, your lyrical way with words...they all made for an incredibly wonderful read. Thank you!

I don't know how far the show has gone wherever you are, but I've read about things I have not seen yet (that, I know). I can say though, that this a really beautiful piece or writing. How you get to each of the characters' feelings, and thoughts, it's great. :)

absolutely beautiful. i love the rhythm that your writing has.

Oh, wow. This is so insightful and heartbreaking. It flows beautifully and you captured Sam's pain so well. Just wonderful!

That...that was amazing. The small details, the flow, the characterizations - all left me completely enthralled. Very, very nice.

what a fantastic and amazing story :) I absolutely LOVED it! It's competletly in character and so sad at the same time. I felt bad for Samantha, and Jack never letting her go. It seems it was good for her to change divisions and move on. How sad though. I'm just glad you had it end the way you did :D

Wow, this was incredible. Everything is so seamless, and I'm just in love with your characterizations and the whole premise of this story. It's beautifully written, and quite powerful. And I love how it's brought together in the end. I was transfixed from beginning to end. Great job!