 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2009-01-25 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Morgane Lurker 2007-10-16 . chapter 1Great story! Have to fave this one, it's not often I read an Architect-centered anfic, but this one had me reading to the very end, and it awesome =)!
Once again., great story =)!
/Morgane |
 J 2007-07-02 . chapter 1 Nice. It does feel like the Architect would say this. (Though he would probably use bigger words. :)) Good fic. |
 tanya-crest 2004-03-10 . chapter 1that was okay... ^-^ good actually... keep it up. |
 Scritch 2003-12-31 . chapter 1Absolutely wonderful, is all I can say - I can hear the Architect saying these very words as I read them. I didn't care much for his character in Matrix Reloaded (talked to long, and besides, I watched a parody of him that was much more entertaining), however I have always found myself looking for fics on his just to see how well he can be elaborated on. This hits the nail right on the head - congratulations. The finishing line 'because he began to think like a Machine' is very interesting, and I like it. I look forward to reading and reviewing your other works, as well! |
 knbnnate 2003-11-22 . chapter 1*Very* cool... :-) |
 DougS 2003-11-17 . chapter 1Fantastic! It sounds exactly like the Architect. I love his unique way of speaking and I definitely admire how you managed to cpature it so perfectly. And I love the perspective you portrayed him having on the end of the war. I love it. |
 Cmdr. Gabe E 2003-11-15 . chapter 1the architect had always intrigued me and it was kewl that you delved into his mind in this fanfic. i like how you narrated the architect's inner thoughts :). he was very in-character and it was very interesting how he talked about the difference between humans and machines. heheh...kinda makes you wonder how he and the oracle get along, eh? :). |
 Dark Puck 2003-11-15 . chapter 1Very interesting. You captured the personality of the Architect almost perfectly! I like this story a lot! |
 unwinding fantasy 2003-11-11 . chapter 1This s great! You've nailed the fundamentals of the Matrix and Neo and Smith's connection. Absolutely perfect, I couldn't have put it better myself! |
 The Rushing Wind 2003-11-11 . chapter 1Oh, interesting. Very interesting. 'Because he began to think like a machine' is definatly something I haven't heard before. :) This would certainly suit the Architect's viewpoint of him. And the title fits pefectly-- the Architect pround of Neo, his little son, or whatever he thinks. Kinda proud that he became like a machine.
Anyway, very good fic. :) Very well written! *claps* |
 Almostdefunct 2003-11-11 . chapter 1Very nice. A most ingenious paradox.
One of the better post-Revolutions ficlets I've seen. I'd like to see more of your work. |