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Ducky'sgirl4ever
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
Morgane Lurker
2007-10-16 . chapter 1
Great story! Have to fave this one, it's not often I read an Architect-centered anfic, but this one had me reading to the very end, and it awesome =)!
Once again., great story =)!
/Morgane
J
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
Nice. It does feel like the Architect would say this. (Though he would probably use bigger words. :)) Good fic.
tanya-crest
2004-03-10 . chapter 1
that was okay... ^-^ good actually... keep it up.
Scritch
2003-12-31 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful, is all I can say - I can hear the Architect saying these very words as I read them. I didn't care much for his character in Matrix Reloaded (talked to long, and besides, I watched a parody of him that was much more entertaining), however I have always found myself looking for fics on his just to see how well he can be elaborated on. This hits the nail right on the head - congratulations. The finishing line 'because he began to think like a Machine' is very interesting, and I like it. I look forward to reading and reviewing your other works, as well!
knbnnate
2003-11-22 . chapter 1
*Very* cool... :-)
DougS
2003-11-17 . chapter 1
Fantastic! It sounds exactly like the Architect. I love his unique way of speaking and I definitely admire how you managed to cpature it so perfectly. And I love the perspective you portrayed him having on the end of the war. I love it.
Cmdr. Gabe E
2003-11-15 . chapter 1
the architect had always intrigued me and it was kewl that you delved into his mind in this fanfic. i like how you narrated the architect's inner thoughts :). he was very in-character and it was very interesting how he talked about the difference between humans and machines. heheh...kinda makes you wonder how he and the oracle get along, eh? :).
Dark Puck
2003-11-15 . chapter 1
Very interesting. You captured the personality of the Architect almost perfectly! I like this story a lot!
unwinding fantasy
2003-11-11 . chapter 1
This s great! You've nailed the fundamentals of the Matrix and Neo and Smith's connection. Absolutely perfect, I couldn't have put it better myself!
The Rushing Wind
2003-11-11 . chapter 1
Oh, interesting. Very interesting. 'Because he began to think like a machine' is definatly something I haven't heard before. :) This would certainly suit the Architect's viewpoint of him. And the title fits pefectly-- the Architect pround of Neo, his little son, or whatever he thinks. Kinda proud that he became like a machine.

Anyway, very good fic. :) Very well written! *claps*
Almostdefunct
2003-11-11 . chapter 1
Very nice. A most ingenious paradox.

One of the better post-Revolutions ficlets I've seen. I'd like to see more of your work.
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