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| epalladino 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseIt was fascinating the way you made death so romantic. The way you portrayed the kiss they shared was more powerfully described than many more graphic sexual scenes. Thanks, Beth Palladino |
| Terry L. Gardner 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat an interesting story. I'm glad the Captain will get a proper burial. I loved the kissing part of the story. It was romantic and thrilling. Terry |
| xpossibilities 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseA lovely, lovely story. A pleasure to read. Thank you for posting it. |
| CottageGhost 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad to see this posted here! What an amazing concept -- and so well-rounded in relatively few words. I just loved the verse you picked for the headstone, as well as the Captain's remark regarding the absence of dates beneath both their names -- so very fitting. And the ending was so very touching. A truly beautiful story -- thanks for sharing! Chantal |
| Helena Russel 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThank you for this beautiful story. I loved it when the Captain showed Carolyn's funeral and that the Captain finally gets his respectable burial in the cementry. Anne |