Nightwitch87 2004-07-16 . chapter 2Oh. Last time I only reviewed after I'd read it all. But now, that I'm reading the most intense chapters again, it catches me. *wipes tears away*
A little child died, they lost their family, oh my God, that's so sad.
Your story is very moving. |
Nightwitch87 2004-07-14 . chapter 11Very good...but sad AGAIN.
I usually like sad-but-hopeful-stories, but why did their daughter have to die, they don't deserve this?!
Good style again, great story line, a realistic portrait.
Oh, and you spelled "some times" wrong, it's "sometimes". Just thought I'd tell you.
Thanks for the story! |
Beximus 2004-06-07 . chapter 11I remember starting to read this a while ago, and I'm so glad you finished it! Almost had me bawling my eyes out. I think you've managed to capture the emotions of the story well enough for the reader to really understand what's going on with them, and it makes the fic fantastic. Cheers for writing. |
crusherjaneway 2004-04-13 . chapter 11I like your ending. It isn't storybook, but it is hopeful enough for my liking.
Overall, this story proved to be well-done, and thoughtful.
Oh, you spelled "losing" incorrectly.
Thank you for an enjoyable read. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-30 . chapter 10I like this too...now, let's get to the point and have that baby! (I'm a believer and I think that they are pregnant, you never did have them go confirm it so...perhaps a sequel is under way after this?) |
Alison 2004-03-30 . chapter 10 I just love this. Can't wait for the last chapter. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-25 . chapter 9I can totally comprehend...I mean, my aunt lost a baby and she was so scared to try again...keep up the good work. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-22 . chapter 8Aw! I like this too. I can provide support if I want to, if I like it, and like this I do. I'm glad they made up, can't see them fighting...
:(
Now, I hope she's pregnant. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-17 . chapter 7Ah, yes, this is good. I can feel the anger. The memory repression thing is a good point to drag out of TNG lore--even I didn't think of it. :) Nice twist to an excellent story. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-14 . chapter 6Excellent. I enjoyed this chapter, it was an effective outlet into the Betazoid mind. Also, as a female, I must say that holding all the sadness, well, Deanna is doing that brilliantly. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-11 . chapter 5Ah! I knew that a child died. How sad...I like your characterizations, they are pretty accurate for anguish in these characters. Now, what happened? Hmm...
I still don't know how old their child (children?) is (are?) but I'm sick so my thought processes are slower than molasses so I probably will be able to get it later.
Still good! Although the emotion wasn't as heart-wrenching this time around, the nature of the chapter calls for it. I know that there'll be more next chapter. |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-08 . chapter 4I don't think I can live up to my last review...sorry. :)
Anyway, this is a good continuation...I've gotten my R/T fix for the day.
You are still holding me in suspense...I can't wait to see the emotions as Deanna fights her fears to see why this tragedy (that we're not even sure of) occured. |
Trekkie101 2004-03-08 . chapter 4 Great! Realy powerful emotions. Who died? I guess I'm not supposed to know yet. At first I thought her mother, then I thought P or C(who knows why) then I thought maybe their kids...
Anyway, write more or I'll go through withdrawl and lose interest... |
crusherjaneway 2004-03-06 . chapter 3I've missed your writing so much, and it's awesome to see you back in action. I love this story! It's so assured in your style, that even if I didn't see your name at the beginning, I still would have known it was you. Which, of course, means that this story is going to be good no matter what you do. You always do a good R/T.
Who died? I have my suspicions but I'm intriuged and I must know soon. |
Tamara 2004-03-06 . chapter 3 What happened? please update |