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| Jellyman Squirt 2004-08-12 ch 2,  | abuseCool fic. I was confused at first - but then I realised Storm was Ororo, so now it's better. Go you! Squirt |
| Dani 2004-04-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was great! I liked the way you considered what the world would look like through Scott's eyes... "he was on the pale red brick road" Super! |
| Redhead2 2004-02-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really liked your story. Scott and Ororo have a really strong friendship. A lot could be done with it. You did a great job with her determination to save him from himself. Thanks. |
| Mackenzie 2003-12-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is very good, it was sad. But very good. I have to say that when Jean "died" I almost cried myself. War movies do not effect me, but X Men did! :) |
| Alakberaid 2003-12-04 ch 2, | abuseAw this is so cute!!, it´s great, although I love angst, this last chapter with Storm was great, I really hope you write more soon :) |
| aimtbj 2003-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was so cute! It captured Scott's sadness nicely. :) |
| StrangeAffinity 2003-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved it! There are so many fics out there about Scott missing Jean and most of them are cliche, but this one stood out to me. You have a beautiful style of writing that is very bittersweet. Please continue to write more. |
| totally-sara 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abusewow that is fantastic. i love your excellent use of describing words, and it was written very sophisticatedly. (is that even a word? lol) but anyways, it was great. poor scott. i hope he will move on. keep writing! |