i have very mixed feelings on this.
i like it.
the choppy way it was put together, without much detail actually worked for the story.

on the other hand, i wish there were more detail.
its mixed feeling!x]
but all in all, this was enjoyable.

That was a awesome story. I think you should make a series out of it. it's so creative.

Aww! So cute! I love it!

Arigato!

Saki

snif...ohh geez im a sukker for happy endings..so sad n happy

stupid kagura..lol..im lovin dis story

aw..he protected her..sob sob sry im a suker for diz kinda junk..wow yur really talented.one of the best stories if read

aww..poor rin she get hit..evil aunt if i was her shed b dead by now..i wonder if seeshomaru will help her..yur talented im enjoyin diz story alot although i only read one page of it

I olove this story...It's so cute!!I can't believe it's over..(pouts) it's like fruits basket if you ever seen it...I think I really like this for me to compare it to fruits basket...it's like Kyo and Tohru=Sesshomaru and Rin
ME LOVIE!
sa that it ended though!!Just like fruits basket wish it could have gone on forever!!

that was a sweet fic.
you did an awsom job.
kudos for you!

It was a soft, happy ending. Aww. ^^

I loved this chapter. Must keep going!

Where you're going with this is lovely. It reads like a semi-smooth slope, like you know where you're going with this. Especially with the repetition of the people dissapearing/not looking at her once she looks at them, ect. it's like they come to taunt or tell her something, then she's ignored. It really aids the lonliness theme.

One thing I would suggest is that you show more, less telling.

"The bus rasps in front of my house." that's a showing thing, she's seeing/expiriencing therefore we see and expirence it. I like that opening.

I shift uncomfortably and stand up from the ground I sit on.

Sesshoumaru is saying why all the tym lol!
gud story!!

Thtz the kind of aunt I would strangle
Poor Rin
Gud job!

Okay, that might be one of the best fics I've ever read. Thank you God, there are good writers out there. -worships at your feet- XD As you can tell, I loved this story. I think I might wanna go and read it over again. ^_^