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hana
2009-11-23 . chapter 15
great story!
Ribbonseal
2009-10-31 . chapter 15
such a wonderful story! *_*
I luv it so much!
IT WAS JUST SO AWESUM
ScifiSOS
2009-10-15 . chapter 15
I enjoyed this story. Not well written but at the same time it is. Confusing at the least. If you were to put japanese dialogue again it would be best to put a translation at the bottom of the story. Not everyone is familiar with the simpilist of foreign dialogues and it's a good way to learn it. Although I'd like to be warned when two old people kiss, it brings mental images -shivers-

Joking Joking. I'm not kidding about the mental images though.

Sorry if I offended you (someone always gets offended somehow T^T) and have a nice morning!
~Rens
Viridian
2009-10-12 . chapter 3
Great seeing the story move along. I'm glad to see the lack of random Japanese dialogue in this chapter. For overall writing, however, I felt that the previous chapter had fleshed out much of the situation, while this chapter relied mostly on dialogue and single-line descriptions.
Viridian
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
Great story, love the character interactions and seeing how Sakura and McGonagall get along. The story is also well-written -- save for the random Japanese. It might not be a big deal now that much of the story might take place in England, but it was very awkward to read. It seemed like the lines that were in Japanese were those that you knew how to write, and anything else was in English. Is that really a good way to approach writing? It would read much more smoothly and naturally if you just stuck to English for dialogue. I do understand the necessity of honorifics (or rather, I would find it very odd if the story were to lack honorifics).
SnowCharms
2009-08-10 . chapter 15
I believe that if Dumbledore and Minerva were to remember, they will no doubt begin a full-scale campaign to make sure that Fudge is replaced with someone more competant. How dare he say what he did to them, is he asking for a death wish?!

This is such a melancholic end, but it is inevitable, as the wizarding world is not ready to receive such a news.
Fantasyname
2009-07-28 . chapter 15
Now, at the cause of having read this story twice I just HAVE to review.
I simply love this story. Normally even if I love a book/manga/movie/whatever I don't watch or read it more than once if if it's a bit longer (yours certainly counts as long ^^).
First of your writing style. I think I saw some spelling mistakes, but ones that a spelling checker can't catch easily. The style itself is enough to get me totally hocked on your story ^^;.
Second, I love the very dark atmosphere (hope I got this word right, english ain't my native tongue) of a cruel war and even more that you gave our sorcerers some society which I see rarely and I've read quite a lot of fanfictions.
And last, but not least (in fact, most important of it all), you tried something new with the CCS/HP crossovers and I searched for a lot of those. I generally searched for HP-crossovers, even though I don't really like HP (well, except for the world which is kind of cool).
(Ending this fanfiction with one of my favourite songs is just too much.) If I'll get bored, I might just read it again ^^
AlfheimWanderer
2009-05-31 . chapter 15
Its not especially often that I leave a review of a story, but I do so now. A very fine CCS/HP crossover...I found it to be compelling, thought-provoking, and an excellent read all around. Your characterization is more than solid, and you show signs of great skill in the writer's art. =)
Starwings1
2009-05-06 . chapter 15
THat was BLOODY AWSOME!
Mel's Merleawe
2009-02-07 . chapter 15
Lol. This is one of the CCSHP crossovers that I actually like... xD But you know, none of them ever have Sakura finding it for fun. o.O Good writing. xD
-Mel's Merleawe
ageofaquariusstudios
2009-01-27 . chapter 2
Yay! I finally found another HP and CCS fic! Happy dancing time! A bonus: This story is so awesome!
madmanalpha
2009-01-11 . chapter 15
AWESOME! uhh... more words need more... SUGOI! *brain frying for more words* Oh well that is an AWESOME fic i am not sure of the spelling of sugoi, but i know, with my limted knowledge of Japenese, that sugoi means several things and i beleive one of them to be amazing/cool and if it is so then i mean every meaning under that category. Anyway i absoluty loved reading it and i hope you do a sequel to it. Ja Ne.
MrMaster
2009-01-04 . chapter 15
This story was kick a**! Way to go! I wish that you might write a squeal sometime in the future. I think its awesome that Sakura and co... return... with someone (Trying no to spoil)! This story was fantastico! Excellente!! I can't stop raving! It's a rare gem amungst a sea of crack!
MrMaster
2009-01-03 . chapter 3
Oh, this so awesome! You really hold the comedy well!
~Kawaii Cherry~
2008-11-22 . chapter 15
I really, really loved this story. Thanks a lot. ^_^
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