Hey good story keep it coming

Okay I LOVE your story, but are you ever going to update! cuz if you aren't could ya please tell us i mean this is like one of the best stories i read and i wanna know what happens!
Great story!

Do you write for Jak and Daxter! cuz i usally read those stories and i think i saw your name on one of them!

BYE!

Oh, I love your story update soon!

I'm glad to see that you're still continuing this. Hope you get the next installment up soon.

Hey! :) Me again. I'm loving, LOVING the premise of your story, although I'm just curious about two things: 1) Is it possible for a piece of someone's brain to branch off and clog a lobe? If it is possible, wouldn't Finch be brain-dead because part of his brain is floating around somewhere else? And 2) Are neurons visible in CAT scans? I always thought CAT scans were still-frames, and I think it would cost a lot of money to use the kind of technology to view moving neurons, since they're tiny.

Anyway, it's not a major problem, I still think your story's great :) I'll be emailing you in a bit :)

WOW! I loves it. I never thought of reading stories of this serise but my mom made me watch it and I loved it so now I know more then she does and this storie is excellent and I'm gonna stop writeing now cuz I'm going a bit hyper... Can't wait to read it again!

Its so sad... write more!

He should get his sight back after Maya helped him a lot, and he continues to pretend because he starts to realize her loves her

PLEASE CONTINUE!

good work keep it goin'!

wow, that was really good. I hope that you will add some more to it!

Hi!
I really hope Finch is okay, Maya will help him with this, it will be fun to see how they come together.

OMG this is awesome. You've GOT to keep going on this! Don't quit now!

Ypur not going to leave us there are you? This is such a cool story!

DOn't stop updating! I love this fic!