 Sara 'Devilchu' 2004-08-16 . chapter 3 I read this story in the beginning of february...I think..and I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated since.
You haven't abandoned it, have you?
I think that this is one of the most interesting and original ff-fanfictions I've read. ^_^
Please continue with it...*watery eyes*
Please? =) |
 R is for Rebel 2004-07-02 . chapter 3Bravo! I congragulate you for making such a humorous story. I have a bit of a twisted humor, so I find this delightfully laughable.
Do keep on writing. |
 Devilchu 2004-04-29 . chapter 3 You are an amazingly good writer and it pleases me to see that this story has some originality. =D
The way you describe Aeris is wonderful, I like how she is portrayed as a little bit stronger than other writers tend to do. And I'm a BIG Aeris/Seph fan! Keep it up! ^_~
So far, everything about this story is perfect! ^.^ At least in my opinion...and it really tickles my creative veins...I feel like drawing. ;)I might do some fanart..if I may? ^^;
Anyhow...excellent piece of writing, I'm already longing for more. X3 |
 Windy Bakura 2004-01-21 . chapter 3Maybe I should make myself known... after all, I've been reading your story ^_^;;
Anyways... Your story is neat ^_^ I would be happy to be your beta reader... but I see that somebody has already offered on that ^_^;;
I was gonna say something... but I forgot what it was ^_^;; Oh well... continue soon! ^_^\\// |
 dyane 2004-01-20 . chapter 1 ooh this is a good story!
your writing style is nice.
plz update |
 insane-android-ayako 2004-01-20 . chapter 3You've caught my eye with your story. I can tell that I'm going to enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work. |
 Chocobo Goddess 2004-01-20 . chapter 3YAY, another chapter! :)
If you are still looking for a beta reader, I offer my services. I am taking a break from writing my own stuff for a while, and it would be nice to read someone else's work instead.
LOVELY description of the coat and Aerith's reactions to the memory of how she got it. You do a nice job on descriptions in general; by using people's reactions to others rather than a straight description, it gives some neat insights to how the characters perceive their surroundings. Well done again. :)
Oh, and thank you for visiting my site! I just changed the address recently when I got my own domain; not sure if you visited me at azure-luminosity or mare-serenitatis. The latter is the current site.
*watches for more*
*wark* |
 Aurea 2003-12-14 . chapter 2 I can't wait to find out what happens next. Every aspect of the story is so creative and interesting. I've always liked prophesized legends and how they affect the characters. Maybe in the next chapter I will finally find out why Aeris decided to run with Tifa, Yuffie, and Red. Will Aeris ever 'absorb' more of English? (Secretly hoping she meets Cloud in the Avalanche hideout. Or even moreso they meet in a bazar coincidence.)Plus I am dying to know who the men are in the prologue. Can't sit still. Can't sit still. Please Update A.S.A.P.! Anyway, enough of my prattle. Hopefully the rest of the chapters will be as long. |
 Ledophole 2003-12-02 . chapter 2You HAVE to update this soon. I mean like in a few days soon, like maybe 1 day. Your story is so original and funny. I love how Aeris is portrayed, this story is definitely worth looking for an update for. |
 Chocobo Goddess 2003-11-18 . chapter 2Huzzah! Another chapter!
I like how feisty Aerith is. The fact that she incinerated Pres. Shinra was, ah, unexpected...but I really enjoyed this chapter. Poor Seph...lost his coat and the girl. :) I am happily awaiting more.
*wark* |
 Chocobo Goddess 2003-11-12 . chapter 1Hm...I will be watching this fic. It's pretty much known that I like Aerith/Seph, so it will make me happy if that's what you do...but even if you don't, I'm still interested to know who you put her with.
*wark* |