Gr...why is Catherine always the dump-er and Sara the dump-ee? It works though.

raven

evil evil evil old banshee.
jk, kinda ill forgive ya when you explain just why cath broke up

this is a rare, good piece of angst. it's very sharp, very..direct. and it's almost like a stabbing report from sara of what their short relationship was. and almost how empty she tries to think of it now before it hurts her or something. or maybe i'm just reading too much into it :P

if you are thinking about putting another chapter in, a cathrine pov would be cool. just..another insite. although, without cathrine's thoughts it really makes you understand how sara must feel. just...cut off. and i'm making a lot of references to knives and blades aren't i? :P oh well, a good analogy for this story. infact, i have the nerve to say that you're sharp as a tack while writing this. fantastic

Why did they break up? please update.
Great story though

This is good. But why did Catherine break up with Sara? That's just ... sad. :(

o thatsa reali good. hope that u update soon *River*

GREAT!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

So intense, but what a f*cked up ending ... ;)

Great piece of writting but why did Cath do that will there be more. Or is this all ... Damn I hate it when they break up ...

Nepeace