 Assilem-1 2/18/04 . chapter 1Absolutely loved it! . . . I loved the portrait you painted of Vaughn's mother . . . Just the perfect mix of mothering (tending to his wounds), chastising (smacking him in the head for putting his feet on her couch) and pain (of having seen too much with Vaughn's father) . . . It was amazing! . . . And Vaughn's response to his mother! . . . Too cute . . . Almost makes me want a son like Vaughn (and I don't even have kids! . . . and most days, my friends'll tell you I don't want them :) . . . So overall, just an amazingly good story . . . I would have loved for there to have been more . . . Like Vaughn's mother answering his phone later, which might have led to Sydney coming over, which would have been so cool to see her reaction to Syd! . . .
Anyway, my point before I got side-tracked was that this is an amazing story . . . Thanks for sharing! . . .
Melissa |