May I ask?

If that poem was meant for anyone to keep awake, how do you memorize such a long poem like that? I'll be falling asleep half-way! *laughs* But this was still pretty good!

Dude Cool! Awsomer, and wondeerful. I liked it alot. ;p

Wow. Pretty good. It takes a good deal of thought and work to change a poem, especially in a way that keeps the rhyme and rythm intact. I though you did very well. Kudos! The only fault I found was that Kenshin was slightly out of character. That's all! Great spelling, good grammar, and excellent transistion of the poem. You're good!

Ok... that was just stupid. That's making fun of one greatest poems written by Alfred Noyes. I personally was too embarrased for you to read the rest.

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Ne... it's me again... the psycho revier. ::bows deeply::

Call me what you like, demo, I need to say... not just chills... but tears.

That was so good! It was written so well, and the poem seemed so natural! Great job!

Interesting and full of character...nice choice of poem, and topic as well.

WOW! This is a great fic! I love the original poem, which I read in my English textbook, and I LOVE your revised version. I also like your explanation for it-a poem the Ishinshishi used to keep awake. I can almost imagine them doing that...

Cool! I've always liked that poem and I like what you did with it.

*grin*...this is a change from what i've seen so far...]...good!and u really learned something 'bout the wars there...]...was that from THAT book?...keep it up!...hoping to c more of ur works!...uhh...b4 i go...the "highway man" in the story...was it supposed to b another kenshin or was it kenshin himself?..."w/the part 'bout the criss cross scar"...me confused dats all...]...ja!

A very nice fanfic - the way you altered the poem was clever... I enjoyed it