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Heksie
2009-09-06 . chapter 13
Loved the fic - sad that you didn't complete ir - but thanks for the run down...
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 11
This was just like the Dursleys! Punishing Harry for something he didn't do! This was torture! Harry hasn't done anything wrong!!
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 8
Cute!
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 7
Well Harry did try to keep people away from him! It isn't his fault if no one respects him enough to do as he asks!
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 6
Harry needs to teach these SOB's a lesson! Have this psychologist tear them anew a$$hole!! What they have done is destructive!
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
These stupid people really have no idea what the hell they are doing do they? They have just committed the three worst things they could have done!
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
As for helping Harry by keeping him a prisoner in the same house he kept Sirius a prisoner in all Dumbledore is doing is making it harder for Harry to get over things. harry needs to get out of the house for a while. Beside he doesn't trust anyone enough anymore. Refuse to hand over the key, Harry. Refuse to go back to school. Demand to be treated with more respect and consideration for your wants and needs. Tell Dumbles that he lost his right to have any say. That you no longer trust him to have your best interests at heart if he ever did which you don't think he did.
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 3
Snape, you could have handled that so much better.
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 2
Actually all Harry had to say was I will talk to someone when I find an adult that I can trust who hasn't already let me down. That would have put Dumbledore in his place.
Cassandra30
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Superb start! I think Harry needs to add some things like "This can't be new information. My letter came addressed to "The Cupboard Under the Stairs". I have asked every year not to go back because they don't treat me well. Nobody has ever asked why? The Twins told everybody when the rescued me in the third year that there was bars on my window and I was fed through a cat flap. How many times have I been injured and in the Hospital Wing? Could you tell there was something wrong?
Rori Potter
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Poor Harry. Great.
Elysia1
2009-05-06 . chapter 4
Thanks for making me cry!! How rude!!

Heehee. Awesome chapter. I heart the weasleys!

=o)
Elysia1
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
Wow!! This is so well written. I LOVE Severitus challenges and whenever it is badly written it is such a struggle to read but this is such a delight. Am so excited to see what happens next but thought I'd review as I go because I hate it when people don't review.
Ely.
Rocket
2009-03-08 . chapter 13
Ah, that's so tragic.

But I really, really appreciate your finalizing this story as you did. The brief overview of what was going to happen was well recieved. :)


Thanks,
Rocket
Annette
2009-02-09 . chapter 13
Thank you for the outline but please PLEASE please finish Lies. The story and circumstances you have created deserves to be completely finished.
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