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| Finale Kamui 2008-01-21 ch 2,  | abuseYou really should update soon, your story is perfect, the characters are all themselves... well Hikari, yeah she could possibly act like that, knowing her and everything So hurry up and update it, i think i'm not the only one enjoying this and dream a little dream of me was also a really good one shot written by you, so continue the good walk just from another Rei/Shinji fan, and please don't turn it into a shinji and asuka story... that would be heart breaking... i mean that seriously |
| Astronomy Geek 2007-12-29 ch 2, | abuseplz update! no OOC and beautifully written; great job ^^ rei/shinji foreva! |
| brindani 2006-12-01 ch 2, | abuseNow this was a treat. I hadn't checked in awhile and found that there was another chapter added in my absence. I was quite happy to see the addition. It is a very good chapter adding a lot of potential. The line of thought has been used often with Rei becoming attached to Shinji and Auska jumping on board when she realizes what she is missing, but I never grow tired of the original ways that it is all brought together. You're doing great and I can't wait to see what happens next, brindani |
| Archimagine 2006-02-21 ch 2, | abuseI like it. Keep going. Although, if you are going to keep doing one chapter at a time, you might want to make it longer. |
| moongirlSelene99 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseHm... interesting... update, PLEASE? |
| CrimsonGaze 2005-09-16 ch 2, | abuseWell... now is about another year passed and I'm reviewing... update it then... |
| Gambit22 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWell, I really like the way you use the English language. It makes reading so much better when the author knows how to use words. My only real complaint is this. You like to write these sentences that are very well written, but seem to go on for longer than they need be or you reiterate the same thing twice. Other than that, I like it. Shinji is a little OOC, but not to much. Good job. |
| bmatsea 2005-08-22 ch 2, | abusearg! hurry up and continue this thing |
| Kraven Ergeist 2005-08-20 ch 2, | abuseHmm...I've been wading through most of your Shinji/Rei fics, and while msot of them made either Shinji or Rei far too OOC, this one seemed plausible. I liked it. |
| DMage96 2005-06-16 ch 2, anon. | abusek this is a nice fic man. cant wait for you update lol. thanks for writing. lol ^_^ |
| inuygoku 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat job with your story keep it coming! "some pigs fly some pigs dont the ones that dont are used for bacon! ~Inuy~ |
| Vash 2005-04-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome story so far. Please update soon. |
| kyle nuttall 2005-01-29 ch 2, anon. | abusenice story man i like ones like this and the spelling, gramma and detail are great so i hope chapter three comes up soon. |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-01-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat ending! |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent first chapter. |