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| Sour Green Apple 2004-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseYah, I'm a Seto/Malik fan...it's werid but hey! I think the whole concept works! |
2003-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This was so emotional. I really enjoyed it. I especially liked how you incorporated the flashbacks into the story. |
| Konjou 2003-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, a couple i never actually thought off, and its great! |
| Nenya85 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is both lovely and sad. The Malik x Seto pairing is an unusual one, and I liked how you used the sennen rod to unite them. I also liked how it was a focal point for their attitudes towards power -- where Malik still wanted the power of the rod, and Kaiba refected it as one more burden. I also loved the part where he used it as a paperweight -- that seemed so in character. I also thought his making Malik promise to outlive him was in character for someone who has suffered as many losses as Kaiba. Is this a one-shot, or are you planning to continue with Malik's story? |
| purkle-dragon-goddess 2003-11-12 ch 1, | abuseoh that's just...so...*sniffle* sorry I have to go wipe this dust out of my eyes... |