 Nenya85 2003-11-14 . chapter 1This is both lovely and sad. The Malik x Seto pairing is an unusual one, and I liked how you used the sennen rod to unite them. I also liked how it was a focal point for their attitudes towards power -- where Malik still wanted the power of the rod, and Kaiba refected it as one more burden. I also loved the part where he used it as a paperweight -- that seemed so in character. I also thought his making Malik promise to outlive him was in character for someone who has suffered as many losses as Kaiba. Is this a one-shot, or are you planning to continue with Malik's story? |