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cLaRiZ-07
2008-08-21
ch 18,
abuseHey!

I know, this is like cheating. I only reviewed the epilogue and yet I enjoyed all 18 chapters of the story. Well, that may be because my laptop got busted and I have to save the story in my PSP just so I can read it. *grin* Seriously! That's how much I love your story. Very original and imaginative. It's like reading a published fantasy book! Besides, their not centered on the romance between Serenity and Endymion. Rather, there's an actual plot where the characters grow. I also like the cameo of the outer senshis. Nice touch!

On the other hand, I kind of feel as if a lot of things are unanswered. Like what happened to Seiya, Demando, Luna, and Artemis? How on Earth did Safir ended up in Namoris when he should be safe in the palace in Elysian? Why is Demando so darn irresistable? What happened to the sword made by Haruka and Hotaru and Setsuna? Why did the wedding of Kunzite and Minako got delayed? (I guess that's going to be answered in the sequel.) And well, that. I was hoping all that would be answered in the epilogue. I guess you have something else planned?

I fervently hope you write more stories of epic proportions - and length. *grin* It's been fun journeying with our favorite cross-dressing-dead-princess-turned-out-to-be-alive-awesome-warmage Serenity. I kind of miss Casamir Nathail. And the many adventures he/she had to endure.

cLariz_07

xoxo
Keep it up! Oh, and I actually love your penname. It's kind of sounds as if thoughts are fragile.
Elen-Di
2008-08-02
ch 1,
abuseI decided I'm going to reread this story completely because I love it so much... I don't know what I reviewed about it already, but I just want you to know that this story is one of the more beautiful ones I've read in a long time. The characters especially vibrate with life and tangibility; they make the story as amazing as it is. Thanks so much for writing this. :)
Chillaxin101
2008-07-24
ch 11, anon.
abuseCongradulations! Even though you're already married now, haha
My Veggie Burger
2008-07-21
ch 18, anon.
abuseThis was, in all honestly, one of the best written fics I have ever read on this site. I am so happy to have found it. The story was amazing, and the time and work placed into definitely showed. You are a very gifted writer.
MindaAnn
2008-07-18
ch 18,
abuseOne of the best stories ever! I love the ending! A must read!
Starlit Warrior
2008-04-01
ch 18,
abuseWow! That is one awesome book! Don't change your name tho...i kinda like it, it's unique. Just my opinion though, =P. Take care God Bless, and good luck to any future books.
SammieAtHome
2008-03-30
ch 18,
abuseWhat an amazing ride! This was a truly magnificent story. I believe you were able to give these characters great depth and because of that were also able to avoid being stuck to the originals. Yes, Alternate Universe stories related to Sailor Moon are not always admired. But like you said in the beginning, there are exceptions. You are one.
Sailor Silence
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI originally started reading this story on and i thought it was absolutely brilliant then. I still think that now. Keep up the good work.
Lps
2008-02-13
ch 18, anon.
abusegreetings amber. i really dont have the words to describe what im feeling right now. i just finished reading your fanfic. i guess i was overwhelmed with how the story progressed, the plot, character development, twists,... it was all perfect. honestly, this story is the only story i read in one sitting. and it took me 8 hours to finish it. gosh... im still kind of in a daze, an after effect. im a certified moonie, and i guess its the main reason why i found your story fantastic. thank you for this once in a lifetime amazing story. hoping for more stories from you. thank you again.
Amanda/Maze
2008-02-08
ch 18, anon.
abuseWow! That is the best way I can describe what I thought of your story. I loved it a lot. This was a great universe and I especially picking out the names from the SM series. I am sad that it ended but glad on how it ended. Thanks for your hard work and I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Poison Gaze
2008-01-17
ch 18,
abuseThat was the most incredible piece of writing. when you do publish that book I will buy it. Your story is really a work of art I don't think I've ever been more drawn in by any fanfiction I've ever read. So thank you for sharing it with us, I look forward to reading more of you work.
~poison-gaze
jayods83
2008-01-13
ch 18, anon.
abusehi. enjoyed reading your story. thanks
Elen-Di
2008-01-11
ch 18,
abuseWhen I started reading this story, it completely KIDNAPPED me. It sank its claws into my brain and wouldn't leave me alone until I finished it, often to the detriment of unfinished homework. =) I LOVE this story fiercely - it is amazing and funny but real and I am SO happy for the ending of the last chapter (disregaring the epilogue). But the epilogue also reminds of real life... and it makes me happy anyway. =) Thank you for writing this story - I look forward to reading others by you. =)
Poison Gaze
2008-01-11
ch 12,
abuseI am throughly enjoying your story it is among the best I've ever read I can tell you put alot of thought into your plot the hard work definently shows, so thanks...
artisia
2008-01-03
ch 18,
abusethis is a very nice story.. good job!
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