Ugh, I HATE cliffhangers. keep going :)

sequal please do a sequl ur story rocks

YES! this is Minion, not empress of mice, just so ya know.
It's a little unclear, but that can be fixed...more!

i think there should be a sequal

huh? that was nothin. Go on,keep on writing, it won't kill u. I like this angle of the story b/c usually Rouge's the one who has all the problems with trusting anyone, but here, you make it gambit. Maybe this similarity will help you make an interesting story of how they learned to trust together. I think it's good so far and has a lot of potential, but it's so short! continue the story pleez

Yes! Write the next chapter soon

er ... this one's a bit hard to follow, i think you need a little more narration to let the reader know what's happening ... as in how they get remy out of the cell and onto the plane, and when he loses consciousness and so on. sequel ... yes!

p.s. spellcheck

spiffy. keep it coming! ;-)

yes write more...please...no more tortue...hehee, i'm just kidding - about the torture part, please still continue. k, sugar rush over...end of message