|Reviews for Lucky Break|
| Indigo Fireflight 11/7/05 . chapter 1
Ugh, I HATE cliffhangers. keep going :)
| Karakin 6/1/04 . chapter 1
sequal please do a sequl ur story rocks
| Empress of Mice and her M 5/6/04 . chapter 1
YES! this is Minion, not empress of mice, just so ya know.
It's a little unclear, but that can be fixed...more!
| Nightsky821 12/2/03 . chapter 1
i think there should be a sequal
| lixa 12/1/03 . chapter 1
huh? that was nothin. Go on,keep on writing, it won't kill u. I like this angle of the story b/c usually Rouge's the one who has all the problems with trusting anyone, but here, you make it gambit. Maybe this similarity will help you make an interesting story of how they learned to trust together. I think it's good so far and has a lot of potential, but it's so short! continue the story pleez
| Roguie-89 11/14/03 . chapter 1
Yes! Write the next chapter soon
| wyndsong 11/13/03 . chapter 1
er ... this one's a bit hard to follow, i think you need a little more narration to let the reader know what's happening ... as in how they get remy out of the cell and onto the plane, and when he loses consciousness and so on. sequel ... yes!
| ishandahalf 11/13/03 . chapter 1
spiffy. keep it coming! ;-)
| leann 11/13/03 . chapter 1
yes write more...please...no more tortue...hehee, i'm just kidding - about the torture part, please still continue. k, sugar rush over...end of message