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Reviews For: Best Laid Plans 4

Bobboky
2006-06-28
ch 1,
abusenice
Kyra2
2004-08-27
ch 1,
abuseFinally have time to catch up on all of these again, and of course, they're as good as ever.
Deidre
2004-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just wanted to write and say how much I am OBSESSED with this series! I only discovered it a few months ago and now have got into the habit of checking back regularly for updates - it's definitely my favourite crossover fic I've ever read . It's amazingly written with an absolutely compelling plot, great characterisation - brilliant all round! It's permanently on my bookmark list waiting for updates as they come in - thank you so much for spending the time to write it as it's a pleasure to read! :)
Akyre
2003-12-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseI totally love you! Your stories are wonderful. Everytime your a new story appears with your name I know it'll be something I'd love and keep. Thank you for writing in the Highlander fandom. Good writers are appearing less and less in the Highlander fandom.
EyEzOnLy
2003-12-03
ch 1,
abuseThis series just gets better and better! Please tell me that the next part is coming out soon!
era909
2003-11-15
ch 1,
abuseOh boy. You have no idea how irritated I was last night when I saw you had posted 2 new BLP stories. Not because you had posted of course, but because it was so late that I had to put off reading them until today.

Anyway, review it was.

BLP 3 was really good. Great build up for the events solved in part 4. The renegate watchers was a nice twist, even though the plotline fell a little short because of Methos' newfound powers.

Clayton is getting more and more interesting. It'll be fun to see how he's getting out of the tight spot he's in now. Obviously he's not getting anything out of the deal he made with Galen's goa'uld.

Nice to see that the immortal race will continue to grow. It was a good, slightly deeper view of Methos and I think you explained his motivations and actions very well.

Jacob wasn't acting very nice in part 3 but after their little talk in part 4 he should shape up. Hopefully. :)

It'll be fun to see Mac at SGC. He should be able to get into some real trouble when he's got the whole galaxy to look for it. ;)

Methos as a full-fledged ancient. Now that's FUN. I've always enjoyed powerful good characters beating the crap out of the bad ones - as long as it doesn't go overboard.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of this series and I hope your muse cooperates. I'll probably spending quite some time trying to figure out where you'll take this. :)

Some questions:

Are you planning to bring in the Tollan? Should be fun to watch their reaction when the Tau'ri starts to use the technology of the ancients.

Will you bring Cassandra into the story again? I'm a sucker for happy endings and I usually enjoy stories where they work out their problems. She should have easier to accept that Methos has changed now when she can feel him through the link.

When SG-1 catches Jacob and Galen spying on them Methos considers blanking their memories of what they heard. When the goa'uld has been extracted from Galen they send it with the Tok'ra for safe keeping as it knows about the security at SGC and some other stuff. Why didn't he blank the memory of the symbiote and then send it with the Tok'ra? Would have solved that problem...

One last question. Why have you chosen to post the stories as different parts like this? BLP 1 and 2 works together like one story and the same for 3 and 4. Is there some subtle thing I've missed or...?

Phew.. that was more than I'd planned to write. :)

I love the story and naturally I hope you'll post a new part soon (and yeah, I know it takes time to write, but one can dream huh? :) ).

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. It brightened up an otherwise dull day.

~Era
Achelois
2003-11-15
ch 1,
abuseoh my god please have another out soon! i'm dieing with antisipation!!
Magda1
2003-11-14
ch 1,
abuseOk - this is very well written. Tension is maintained nicely, action keeps coming; interesting plot.

But I struggle with some of the fundamental premises - a semi-omnipotent Methos gets a bit wearing, and detracts a bit from the integrity of the SG characters.

All the same, I'm really enjoying!
Lady Cinnibar
2003-11-14
ch 1,
abuseThank you very much for writing this. I enjoy it greatly. And I can't think of anything exact to say, because the review page wouldn't load when I tried it the day before yesterday, so I'm re-doing it now. Bleh.
I look forwards to five, of course. :D
Melissa45
2003-11-13
ch 1,
abuseI just read Best Laid Plans 3 & 4! I think they're great! I can't wait to read more! Will Methos find out about Thomas when he interrogates the symbiote? Also, I wish you would update your other series as well..
Patti
2003-11-13
ch 1, anon.
abusewonderful! And there's still more to come! You are great. This series is full of surprise and action. very well done. Can't wait for the rest!
Patti
2003-11-13
ch 1, anon.
abusewonderful! And there's still more to come! You are great. This series is full of surprise and action. very well done. Can't wait for the rest!
Patti
2003-11-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI am so pleased you've continued this! And there's still more yet to come, wonderful. Dare one hope that the more is coming soon?! Please.
Kyra2
2003-11-13
ch 1,
abuseMore!! I need more!! And I need it soon!

Alrighty, now that I've gotten that out of my system it's time for the real review. Prepare to listen to me ramble on about this installment until I can't think of anymore to say!

Glad to see that Galen has been taken care of. That poor man must have been in hell with that creature inside him. But now the creature is out and he's free. Oh, and thankyou for explaining how a symbiote can replace another. It was pretty greusome and I now understand why the Tok'ra don't do it.

Are you ever going to kill Clayton? I almost think you should. It would promise to be interesting after all. And you can't say the man doesn't deserve it. Though I wouldn't want him to die before being disgraced in front of the President.

Oh, and what are you planning with him anyway? He obviously thinks he's made some serious connections and has most likely told the President about them. So what is going to happen when they don't follow through. After all, the symbiote he made friends with is no longer in any position to be making deals with corrupt tauri.

Nice way to have them find out about their spies. And wonderful way to resolve the problem. Also a good thing that O'Neill and the others now know a little more of what he's capable of. That way if it becomes necessary they'll know what they can count on. At least a little of it.

What are you planning on having the Tribunal do? I can't imagine that they're terribly pleased about the immortals and watchers interacting. But they don't want to risk the war that would inevitably take place if they tried doing anything to Methos. The other immortals would destroy them. It would be cool, but not pretty.

Mac certainly learned fast. Guess it must have something to do with all the time he's spent in the military. I look forward to seeing him do more gate travel.

Hmm...that seems sufficient. At least for now. You'd better keep writing. Will be very disappointed if you don't.
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