wow couldnt think it could get better but here it did and it blow me away i cant believe it. well now im off to read the next one and i cant wait for more. :) congras great writing :)

really good! i read ur first one and im still going!!

I love these stories!! Although I am wondering how many times Kitty can get raped and not go insane, I can clearly picture every charaacter and location in my mind. The brief mentions of Kitty's and Jack's romantic interludes keep me going until POTC@ comes out.
Keep up the great work!

Great!

:)

Aw... I must say I am really glad in all that chaotic stuff, Jack knew his what was right. Even if Kitty did get him to do it.
I can't wait to read the next one. Simply beautiful. I don't know what to say really.

Ta til tomorrow buddy

No reviews? Pish posh.
Kinda reminds me of chocolat with the dancing. (:
Oran found himself a girl! Yay!
Very sneky.
:D

Oh! I loved that line, "Thank you dear William." It made me chuckle.
I think Kasia and Oran should have a thing. But it'll be hard with her in Tortuga...But then again... Lol.
I am glad Kitty didn't fuss after being let out. (: Much more clean and simple.

Cat fights are always interesting. I hate that stupid bloody Mary. I knew I did!
BAH! But it was brilliant.
I couldn't stand being in the brig... I can't stay in confined spaces... clausterphobic(sp?) ye know... just for future reference (:
That was wonderful...

Oh... Mary Spence is awful she is... I dunno about her. She'll get a run for her money once Kitty and her get appropraitely introduced I think.
Good thing were all watching from a safe distance then aye?

Radiant.
I love how Jack gets right to the orders... as if he was never gone. Whoop!
Oran got his unfortunente (**) then? He needs some lovin' just not the kind where he has to pay after...
They are on the pearl...

I need a few new praises I think. But this is jolly good. (:

Teves is odd really. But I like him enough...

Poor Oran. I'd hate to see him get killed off or turned down by someone...):

I'll keep reading... til the end (:

I found it funny that Jack interduced Kitty as "Captain" although she is. It brought a smile to my face.

He remember how to say Parley. WHoot! :D

Poor Oran! I wish we could find him a woman. A decent woman. But I'd hate to see him leave the pearl...
I wish I was old enough to buy rum to mail to Jack, though that would be a problem without a fake I.D. or a time machine... and that's he's fictional...

:le gasp: juss' kiddin'. (:

Jack's hair and beard? No. He's not the same. But still Jack (:

Eight monthes... tsk tsk. (;

That's pretty ca-yoot. :D

I better keep reading. I hope to catch up to you... well you know...