great story

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no no no no no! they're supposed to be together! ::ahem:: sorry about that. just a personal opinion. good story.

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mushhy

This story is heartbreaking. So beautifully written and so filled with emotion. I can't believe you are leaving us with this ending! But yet, I should find it strangely realistic if the romantic in me would let me accept it. Excellent work.

Awsome. that was just awsome. cant wait for ur next fic

No! NO! No!
Good fic. Great job, etc., but NO!

There's going to be more to this, isn't there? I mean, Grissom has been an **, but Sara isn't cruel. She wouldn't just walk out of his life without a word. That would be too mean. He might deserve it, but she'd never do that.

Can't wait to see more.

That was a beautiful story and very intense. The end made me sad (sniff), but you portrayed the characters very realistic. I liked it very much.

(I hope there will be no two reviews with the same content, but when I am sorry, but my computer shut down during my first try)

OMG..how sad and beautiful is this!! It's just a really powerful fic because Sara's emotions are so strong, so true!! But...I ned a sequel! You ned to write a sequel!

Geena

OMG...you know you have to write another chapter to this right?
Thanks for sharing
mandy

Wow! A strong Sara who takes her future into her own hands. I wasn't even disappointed in Grissom. They've made him such an ** this season that I can see him trying to pacify Sara in this manner. Although, I wouldn't mind seeing a follow up where he realizes he is an idiot. Hint,hint.

*gasp* you are gonna continue this aren't you!?!?! you can't just leave it at that!

Great short story...the ending was definately not expected at all. I never get sick of reading your writing!!

That was beautiful. How nice it would be to see something along this line played out.