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| Yami Vizzini 2008-01-12 ch 9, | abuseThat last battle was seriously messed up- in a good way. All in all, this may be the most exiciting installment yet with the unambiguous introduction of the higher (and lower) powers. |
| Sir Brass of the Pen 2005-12-06 ch 9, | abuseI've got to say that this, by far, is my favorite (though I need to reread book 7 and reassess the situation). I like kale's takari, but as an author it seems to me that it often goes overboard. However, how he handled Yolei and Davis showed much more depth and realism. And if you ignore the romantic fluff, the writing overall was TOP NOTCH. Battle scenes, emotions, PLOT, and STORY were all wonderfully done. THe things that were written in this book took GREAT imagination and inspiration. Romance needs some tweaking into the real world, but that's just the cynical me speaking. One thing I do appreciate is T.K.'s restraint (sexually speaking) throughout the sagas, that and his drive to protect her shows a most noble quality. Kale has really delivered on showing us the PURITY of the love between T.K. and Kari, despite how young they are, and that is something to be praised mightilly. That, and the villiany brought forth in this book was like none before it (except in books 3 and 5, and even then the villiany here tops it, but only barely), and really did a good job of showing how evil it was without being cliche. Kale, bravo on your best work so far (not counting book 7...yet). Eowyn, bravo on letting us reread them again. |
| JTNeal 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseNice |
| K Patrick 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAlliance of the damned indeed. Those two together bring lots of problems! |
| Curtis Zidane Ziraa 2004-02-28 ch 9, | abuseAw. So kawaii! I liked! Get the next story up soon! |
| Sandy Spectra 2004-02-26 ch 9, | abuseGreat ending. A cliffhanger of a great ending of sorts but still a great ending. So I guess we're on countdown notice for Once and For All, right? |
| anonymouse 2004-02-26 ch 9, anon. | abuseSEE? There are good fics for digimon, you just have to find them!! |
| miaow227 2004-02-26 ch 9, | abuseGREAT GREAT GREAT FIC Loved it all. Great Takari and Daikayo. Congrats on writing such a good fic. See you around! |
| * 2004-02-26 ch 9, anon. | abusePerfect! Inside the 2nd monster with Takeru stomping on the lost souls because he thinks they're evil, and then feeling scared when he knows they're not. That captures the essense of Takeru. And Patamon. There aren't enough fictions where Patamon has this big a part. Remind you to forward this all on to kale if you can and tell him he's awesome! |
| K Patrick 2004-02-26 ch 9, | abuseI think I'm inspired to do more fanart! How about Michael standing over Tk and protecting him? I would do Davis and Yolei in the kitchen but I just can't get behind davis. Now you can get 'Dawning' up quickly, right? Because it took you three months to put this whole thing up and that's unforgivable. |
| Phillip 2004-02-26 ch 9, | abuseAnd so we're set up for Once and For All. "It is well, Paragon, that you love. For there will come a time when your love will bless this world as it has been blessed only once before." I'm giddy about seeing book seven now. The demon's plans are made clear, T.K. has seen the Crest of Hope as the Sword of Ages, and knows what it means to be exalted as the Paragon. Even though we know it's going to hurt him in the end. And a word about how kale writes romance. It's pretty entertaining how the girls always seem to be the ones in charge or aggressive and the boys are fumbling boobs. Cool, really. |
| Phillip 2004-02-25 ch 8, | abuseJust a phenomenal piece of fanfiction art. Keep in mind I know how it ends, and I was still almost crying as T.K. dragged himself away from Roan's cocoon thing. Okay, so we have the epilogue, Until the Dawning of Forever and then Once and For All. I'm drooling in anticipation. Almost but not quite literally. |
| Artemis of the Ice 2004-02-25 ch 8, | abuseEEp! And the Sixth Book of kale's Sagas is nearing its end...*glomps absent kale* Can't wait for more! I first read his stories in 2001, but only books 2, 3, and 5. Now, I'm becoming complete *hugs to Eowyn* Thanks so much for reposting! Artemis |
| tk293 was a stupid name 2004-02-22 ch 8, | abuseDamnit. Roan died. He was an awesome character, I liked him better than any of the others - they were mostly one-dimensional. Roan was unpredictable but calculating at the same time. He was badass. Now that he's gone, there's a void on the evil side. I guess "Once and for all" is the battle against the evil angel. Kind of weird, because Roan was the villain for 5 stories. He should at least be in the finale. |
| Wanderer14 2004-02-19 ch 8, | abuseNow THAT is what I call epic. A wonderful story all the way through written just like I like it. Plenty of enjoyable material in each chapter and scribed through like a true master. |