Nice to run into another MW alum, though I haven't been in years. Anyway, this is a nice little story. The subway idea does have lots of possibilities. Although the characterization overall was fine, I was really not convinced by Jack's walking through the portal. Even with all the background about boredom, it doesn't seem like a thing he would ever actually do. It might work better if a Jaffa came through first, or they saw something on the other side they felt they had to respond to. I liked your use of the thermos to keep the two timelines tied together. It would have been interesting to have more explanation about how they found the gate address. Also, I really doubt the two of them would have gone by themselves to extract Teal'c and Jack. Even though the back team wouldn't have to have any part in the story, just mentioning it would make it more credible.

Lol liked this. interesting view on the stonghenge. Afterall they must do somat why not that! What bout writing something else involving it??

You caught the voices of the characters well. Good story.

I liked this a lot, very funny!

Im impressed with it. i honestly thought you were going to kil of jack and teal'c.
nice one