hi! that was pretty good!

Its really depressing to see you stop writing. And here I thought I'd found the best HP/ YYH crossover on hte site, although you had gotten a bit sloppier writting in the last few chapters. You really had something going. Too bad... Wish I had the time to help...

Very interseting story, although there were some grammaical mistakes here and there. Nice job, though, nonetheless.

...right, well, it was very long, and not that detailed, more detail would be nice, and take time to right one section, not loads, it can be annoying to read.

oh, and Kurama is actually very patient, so I don't think he'd suddenly get really mad, Hiei's a fire demon right, so he must be able to warm himself up, and he can run at high speeds, so Gringotts wouldn't really affect him

apart from that, this is quite good

try paragraphs!also
your chapters are to
long.

stupid

hey i like ur story!

i love ur story but im VERY confused if u could explan thinge in an e mail i would be very great full. u kind of lost me 2nd or 3rd chapter in. i really like the story i cant wate 4 more

update quick.

gr8t fic!! hope you update soon oh and one vote 4 hiei!!

poor yusuke. i hate peeves!

poor hiei. one day koenma's gonna' die to and angry hiei.

how can you not get lost in that huge place!

that was good! poor kurama and his sensative ears.

ha ha!