In this day and age where people consistently write conclusions to conflicts, this stands out, even thought the conflict is never solved. Compared to what I've read on this site, this is a breath of fresh air.

Hey that was an interesting story. I liked it alot especially the part where Ryoga and I talk about our friendship. ANy ways I would like to know somthing you put in your fic what does OAV stand for please e-mail me at thanks.

I really liked it! This fic and its concept of getting absolutely nothing resolved is exactly within the characteristics of the Ranma storyline. Also, you portrayed their characters very well and, overall, it was enjoyable. Keep writing!

though i know this is all it is suppose to be i still wished u would have added on to it. nice sceen though

Wonderfully excuted! I can't believe this is actually your first try. But as I read this I just see a 5 to 6 minute bout between Ranma and Ryouga, I see no actual purpose, conclusion, or result. I don't think that this needs to be one of those overly ran fanfic series, just a completed story. If you produce a conclusion to this that's as well written as this you're sure to get great reviews.

I love this story! Ranma and Ryouga are the bomb! I never would've thought of this to tell you the truth. But anyways, I wish this were a chapter story, I would've kept reading and reading and reading! _ Keep up the good work!

P.S.: can you please try reading my ranma fic? It's my first one and I want your oppinion on it!Thanks!

Pretty good for a first effort.

Next time, shoot for a complete story. While what you have here is well written, this is just a scene. There's no real set up and there's no conclusion.

If you can write complete stories as well as you wrote this scene, it'll be worth my time to read them.

Lol, it was a great first try! Keep on writing I'll be keeping an eye out for you in the future.

-Himitsu The Hunter