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FullMetalRyuzaki2 5/6/11 . chapter 29i love this (well most of it, the exception being "one night at camp" or what ever, but that was personal taste, nothing more) but i REALLY enjoyed the randomness and your wonderful writing style. I have to say that this kept me well entertained (which is more then i can say about most Luna fanfics) and i really LOVE this chapter. a great ending! :) |
revolution rae 8/7/09 . chapter 29This one is quite sad. At the same time, very realistic. I know it's been years since you've updated, but are you planning on ever continuing this? Because you're a wonderful author(: Rae |
revolution rae 8/7/09 . chapter 17Oh, wow...This is really sad, at least my interpretation is... Rae |
revolution rae 8/7/09 . chapter 6I'm curious: Why do you remove all first-person pronouns? Is it to shorten, out of habit, or something else entirely? Don't feel obligated to answer; I can imagine a million reasons and sometimes reality can be a letdown I'm just wondering. Rae |
revolution rae 8/7/09 . chapter 5What I've read so far, I like. It's very Luna-esque. I find it interesting that you removed all "I"s, "my"s, etc. That does seem like something Luna would do...Very well-written. I like that you haven't chosen moments (so far, at least) that would be considered "make or break" in a lifetime. The small moments you've written have far more impact in my opinion. Anyway, now that I've successfully rambled, I'm off to read more. Rae |
deleted2012 6/9/09 . chapter 29I love Luna. :D |
Rasielle 8/5/06 . chapter 29Ending it here? Ah well. 29 is as good a number as any, I suppose. I loved all of them, the ones shippy and humorous and confusing and just plain weird. *haha... pirate Luna...* Quite honestly, there's NO criticism I can spare you. None. Well, it isn't as though I'm exactly trying, either. ((Btw, 29 is the PERFECT ending for this drabble collection. It corresponds to the 'ending' theme, after all, and though the number isn't nice and even, the drabble is, and that's all that counts. Something sober to end one of the most brilliant ficlet collections I've read; very fitting.)) Am faving! |
Bagge 6/12/06 . chapter 27Oh! A mighty fine metaphore indeed. I am sure those two found their very own "untuched paradise (...) that didn't require magical knowledge or skill" in their solicity in the room of requirement. |
Bagge 6/12/06 . chapter 25"For Luna, the first night was the best"... meaning that the comming weren't that nice. Poor girl. Well written |
Bagge 6/12/06 . chapter 24Ah, indeed. Sanity is a question of definition - and who says that Hermione will stay in favour in the wizarding world? Luna's lojality is a wonderful thing. |
Bagge 6/12/06 . chapter 22*breaths in... breaths out* Everyone does it. Everyone... Does... It... |
Bagge 6/12/06 . chapter 13I like this drabble so very much, and I agree with Saara perfectly well. Luna really evoks memories of that ancient magic that drained cows, snatched babies and danced at night with the Fair People... Very perceptive. |
Bagge 9/21/05 . chapter 29Wonderful! Just as you say - how can anyone demand Lunafics to be coherent? "Before forget: yesterday joined Harry Potter’s secret paramilitary organization. Is he planning a coup? Will continue to observe." ;-) |
BellonaBellatrix 8/10/05 . chapter 29Oh my...you know, I will have to say you are remarkably brilliant. It's just hard to say...how each one of these 'caps' are amazingly lovely and powerful and just unmistakenly beautiful. Oh, what was with the traitor bit, in cap 19? I'm very curious about that one ; |
BellonaBellatrix 8/10/05 . chapter 5(blinks) This may sound odd...but I used the same word to describe Luna and this is the first time I've read these...wow. ; Brilliant though. I'm only half way through these. |