That was really funny! Keep writing. D

ROFL! You're totally evil, and I've enjoyed this far too much.

Exactly what I said before - hilarious! (Though why it's letting me review a second time, I don't know...)

Very funny and very easy to picture what you're writing about. Excellent story.

cool it's a shame you finshed there I would love to have see how jack trys to explain this

That was just plain halarious! Great story!

HAHAHAHAH "stack of yak dung"! I almost peed myself! This was very funny, thanks for the laugh!

OMG, it was too funny for words! This story has to come with a food/drink warning. I haven't laughed that hard in ages and God I needed that laugh!

Thank you so much for sharing!

Cher.

Absolutely brilliant! This is one of the funniest stories I've read on here and strangely I think the best line must be *[imagine corresponding hand flap]* because I can so see it in my mind's eye! Fantastic!

I'm gonna die now...right now.

MUWAHAHAHAH

wow! that was so good! i was physically shaking with laughter

Hey hon. Great story as usual.

oh my god, i am actually crying with laughter!

great work, this is excellent! absolutley *waves hands* its that good!

:D:D:D:D:D:D

u have a great writing style as well! :D